Some recent pics- feedback requested
Sep 21, 2019 15:36:10 #
I am always looking for others to critique my work. I would appreciate any feedback on this images. Thanks in advance.
Sep 21, 2019 15:48:34 #
Sep 21, 2019 16:25:30 #
I would say you need a little more negative space in front of the bird and boat. Otherwise, I would need exif to comment further. Focus and exposure seem good, though.
Sep 21, 2019 16:25:58 #
Sep 21, 2019 16:34:04 #
Sep 21, 2019 16:35:23 #
So "fill the frame" is not the right way to go? I can add more space if that makes the image better. Thanks.
Sep 21, 2019 16:38:55 #
Sep 21, 2019 20:35:10 #
Technique (except for out of focus head in #1) and composition are good. What is your aim as a photographer? #1 is "reporting," #3 shows more creativity and imagination.
Sep 22, 2019 05:44:00 #
DrJoeS wrote:
I am always looking for others to critique my work. I would appreciate any feedback on this images. Thanks in advance.
Nice shots.
Sep 22, 2019 06:00:55 #
ArtBob asks a good question - what is your goal? From the wildlife photography perspective, the first image has some challenges. For animal shots, the general belief is that the eyes are the most important focal point, so reframing the entire image would be in order. Also, while this isn’t exactly a “butt shot,” you really don’t want the bird’s back to be the center of attention.
Sep 22, 2019 08:25:40 #
I agree with others. Too tightly cropped on the first two. Also purple appears to be too pronounced. The lizard, I would crop a little more from the left side. Can't comment on much else without a download.
Sep 22, 2019 08:55:36 #
#1 could do with a bit more space above and to the right of Mr Stork. As has been said, focus point should be eye or head. #2 and #3 are just right. Space in front of boat, IMHO, is spot on. If there was more, it would unbalance the picture. Again, IMHO.
Sep 22, 2019 11:01:00 #
The little boat is colourful and lively. The lizard is cute. it's nice that he has no competing background in the image. I think the stork needs a bit more space. He feels cramped to me.
Sep 22, 2019 14:45:45 #
Thanks to all for the feedback.
What is my goal? To make images that people will enjoy.
What is my goal? To make images that people will enjoy.
Sep 22, 2019 15:37:34 #
Bird is perhaps too tightly cropped with no room for it to move too. Looks sharp and good color. The lizard shot would be better on a more natural background, I do not generally like "zoo" shots.
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