Please provide critiques
May 27, 2019 09:35:43 #
The night pictures are my first time experimenting with long exposures. Please provide any critiques. All photos have been editing.
May 27, 2019 10:14:06 #
jkfrankum wrote:
The night pictures are my first time experimenting with long exposures Please provide any critiques. All photos have been editing.
Some nice shots there, but I don’t really see what the ‘long exposure’ contributed except maybe smoother water in #2. How long?
You would get much better suggestions and advice if you clicked on ‘store original’ when uploading so we could see them more clearly.
May 27, 2019 14:07:12 #
May 27, 2019 14:37:25 #
Overall, I like that you are going for mood, yet keep a good composition. Specifically:
#1 seems too color unbalanced to yellow. In whatever program you have, I suggest you move the yellow/blue slider around until you get the feeling of reality, or the exaggeration you want.
#2 and #3, you will want to straighten the horizon. They are pretty.
#4 looks "muddy," with both the tones and the color needing some playing around, to get the proper contrast. Also, it might be great if made into B/W, with just a light touch of contrast.
Happy editing!
#1 seems too color unbalanced to yellow. In whatever program you have, I suggest you move the yellow/blue slider around until you get the feeling of reality, or the exaggeration you want.
#2 and #3, you will want to straighten the horizon. They are pretty.
#4 looks "muddy," with both the tones and the color needing some playing around, to get the proper contrast. Also, it might be great if made into B/W, with just a light touch of contrast.
Happy editing!
May 27, 2019 16:25:43 #
Thanks for the advice. In these pictures, I have attempted to adjust for some of the advice provided. Pictures 2 & 4 were not prolonged exposures.
May 27, 2019 16:31:23 #
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