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Mar 12, 2019 07:54:30   #
daw Loc: Sydney Australia
 
I went for a bush walk around the shores of Sydney Harbour this arvo.

Would appreciate any feedback - especially around composition.

I have done a quick crop and edit using Canon's DPP4.

After some earlier feedback I tried to get closer this time - where I could!

cheers daw

Sunbaking 1
Sunbaking 1...
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Sunbaking 1
Sunbaking 1...
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Man birding is HARD! - shot looking straight up
Man birding is HARD! - shot looking straight up...
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Discovered auto focus don't work here!
Discovered auto focus don't work here!...
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Looking for dinner
Looking for dinner...
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Mar 12, 2019 07:57:40   #
photophile Loc: Lakewood, Ohio, USA
 
daw wrote:
I went for a bush walk around the shores of Sydney Harbour this arvo.

Would appreciate any feedback - especially around composition.

I have done a quick crop and edit using Canon's DPP4.

After some earlier feedback I tried to get closer this time - where I could!

cheers daw


Fine close ups!

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Mar 12, 2019 08:02:08   #
Scruples Loc: Brooklyn, New York
 
Nice Captures. I love the spider waiting in the web.

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Mar 12, 2019 08:05:26   #
Longshadow Loc: Audubon, PA, United States
 

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Mar 12, 2019 08:20:55   #
roxiemarty Loc: Florida
 
Your first one is especially good! And I love the last one too! You are off to a fine start. ( and your spider will be in focus if you change your focusing point to one focusing point, instead of several. That way, you can get the exact thing you want to be in focus.)

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Mar 12, 2019 08:39:22   #
jerryc41 Loc: Catskill Mts of NY
 
Nice set.

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Mar 12, 2019 08:43:57   #
Swamp-Cork Loc: Lanexa, Virginia
 
Looks to me like you are doing great---very nice!

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Mar 12, 2019 08:52:00   #
insman1132 Loc: Southwest Florida
 
Nicely done!!!

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Mar 12, 2019 08:54:13   #
djlouden Loc: Ocala, Florida
 
They eyes say it. Very nice

Happy shooting

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Mar 12, 2019 08:54:32   #
Toment Loc: FL, IL
 
That’s a great start!
Thanks

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Mar 12, 2019 09:03:31   #
markngolf Loc: Bridgewater, NJ
 
photophile wrote:
Fine close ups!


Very well done!!
Mark

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Mar 12, 2019 09:15:11   #
timcc Loc: Virginia
 
Nice shots! Some minor suggestions: #1 - add a little more space on the left, the direction in which the lizard is facing; #2 - did you catch its whole tail in the original?; #3 - doesn't quite work because the branch obscures the birds; #4 - nice pic, try using spot focus next time for an even sharper spider. Good sharp focus on the others, and good color on all.

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Mar 12, 2019 09:57:18   #
SS319
 
Suggestion: Write down exactly what you did to capture and process the first shot, and then....
Keep doing it over and over and over - That is a great shot!

(Although you could have asked the lizard to lower his chin just a little and slowly turn only his head towards the camera... )

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Mar 12, 2019 10:18:28   #
CHG_CANON Loc: the Windy City
 
The spider and first lizard are wonderful. The EXIF for both of these images report Aperture Priority. You might consider stepping down slightly for more depth of field and / or lens sharpness. Look too at your DPP sharpness setting. If processing from RAW, try values 4 to 5, depending on the composition.

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Mar 12, 2019 11:54:14   #
kpmac Loc: Ragley, La
 
Nice set. Looking forward to more.

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