ptf

For my first composition class homework.

rmorrison1116 Loc: Near Valley Forge, Pennsylvania

Interesting, color needs a little work.

dpullum Loc: Tampa Florida

PTF, you did well. I like the grain of the skin, the components of the composition.

Perhaps color does not need work... interpretation. The red spectra transitions into blues... composition is basically good... but this is where taking multi shots from various angles and tweaking the items positions is helpful. [Specifically the neckless]

I have never forgiven my self for taking one shot of a sunken, rotting wooden fishing boat... not realizing how wonderful an item it was... I should have taken many from many angles. A far-out place in Argentina... never will I be there again.

Digital film is zero dollars per shot! Use it often.

ELNikkor

I like the attempt at making the future a different color, but the reflection on the lower glass is distracting.

Tomfl101 Loc: Mount Airy, MD

I like the concept but my feeling is the image would have more impact if a portion of the woman's face showing her mood was included. What I see is an incomplete story. Keep up the good work though!

JeffDavidson Loc: Originally Detroit Now Los Angeles

Interesting composition. I found the necklace or cord distracting.