Grandaughter
Aug 4, 2012 21:31:12 #
A few shots from the other day. I did a little PP in CS5 but they still don't look right to me. Shot with my Canon T1i, 55-250 kit lens. A little help would be appreciated. Thank you.
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Aug 4, 2012 22:03:17 #
Aug 4, 2012 23:41:31 #
I'm having a tough time seeing what's not to like. I think #1 might be a bit loose and #2 might be a bit tight, but nothing serious. Good exposure, focus is sharp. What do YOU see as an issue?
Aug 5, 2012 01:44:04 #
Thank you. I guess I am a little to critical of my own work. I just didn't think they looked sharp enough.
Aug 5, 2012 07:03:56 #
Your subject is sharp. Perhaps it looks out of whack because the bbackground to the riight of her is out of focus. With no background on the left except a small bit above the chair it looks out of balance. It is as if 2/3 of the picture is in focus and 1/3 isn't. That is my take on it.
Aug 5, 2012 08:13:26 #
Aug 5, 2012 08:47:15 #
Grandpa wrote:
A few shots from the other day. I did a little PP in CS5 but they still don't look right to me. Shot with my Canon T1i, 55-250 kit lens. A little help would be appreciated. Thank you.
Except for the cropping, which others have mentioned, I see nothing wrong with the images. Good job in every respect. :thumbup:
Aug 5, 2012 09:45:18 #
Aug 5, 2012 10:13:34 #
I did a little pp on this pic. If you like it & want the other 2 done let me know.
Aug 5, 2012 12:44:29 #
I would try a vertical shot, leaving some room for cropping if necessary, and frame for her whole body. I don't think you could crop the existing photo to just have her reading the book, but a vertical shot could do it.
Aug 6, 2012 10:47:39 #
kavin1957
Loc: Clinton Township
I like all three but if it was me I would kick up the temperature a little which would give her skin more of the glow children have. The colors seem low.
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