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Aug 30, 2018 08:22:26   #
rplain1 Loc: Dayton, Oh.
 
I liked the last the best but would do something about that one hair across her lips. Very good for first attempt but as Charlie157 said - watch the background. No poles coming out of the head or other distractions.

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Aug 30, 2018 08:23:49   #
SueScott Loc: Hammondsville, Ohio
 
They're all nice but #2 is outstanding! However, I would crop the right side in a bit and eliminate some of that dead space.

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Aug 30, 2018 08:36:09   #
lyndyp
 
No it wasn't cropped, we were just walking along and I turned and took a quick shot

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Aug 30, 2018 08:38:52   #
lyndyp
 
No it wasn't cropped we were just walking along and I turned a took a shot

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Aug 30, 2018 08:39:35   #
PRETENDER Loc: Micanopy,Florida
 
You are fast learner. i prefer the last one. Your shoots coming up should be out of site.

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Aug 30, 2018 09:15:30   #
lyndyp
 
I think this is better



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Aug 30, 2018 09:18:45   #
DragonsLady Loc: Los Alamos, NM
 
She's a pretty girl. But, to me, her eyelashes are too spiky. It may be the style, today, but it makes her look as though she doesn't have real eyelashes that will catch debris and keep it from getting into the eye . But what do I know; I'm just a 69 year old matron who seldom work mascara, or any make-up for that matter.

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Aug 30, 2018 10:18:28   #
Redmond Loc: Oregon
 
I agree, if your granddaughter is happy with the pictures, you are done. very nice job.

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Aug 30, 2018 10:21:30   #
Kmgw9v Loc: Miami, Florida
 
lyndyp wrote:
I think this is better



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Aug 30, 2018 10:47:37   #
AzPicLady Loc: Behind the camera!
 
I don't do portraits either. In fact, I avoid them like the plague. So this comes from someone who looks at pictures like this, not takes them. The first one is out for obvious reasons. The second one is very nice. I also like the next to last. But the last one is the real winner. Just my opinion.

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Aug 30, 2018 10:56:33   #
Carolina Wings Loc: Flew from North Carolina to Pennsylvania
 
lyndyp wrote:
My grand daughter will be a Senior this year and asked me if I would take senior pictures for her. Of course I said yes. Well...... I have never done portraits....., but I figured what the heck I'll give it a go!! These are my first shots. We will be doing some more shoots.


Lovely...both the series and your granddaughter!

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Aug 30, 2018 10:58:56   #
RolandDieter
 
5 and 6 are the most appropriate for a yearbook. They tend to go with head and shoulders. The b&w should be enlarged and framed ... or maybe printed on metal.

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Aug 30, 2018 11:14:45   #
Earnest Botello Loc: Hockley, Texas
 
Beautiful young lady Lyndy, very photogenic, you will do well with her pictures.

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Aug 30, 2018 11:19:02   #
DaveC1 Loc: South East US
 
lyndyp wrote:
My grand daughter will be a Senior this year and asked me if I would take senior pictures for her. Of course I said yes. Well...... I have never done portraits....., but I figured what the heck I'll give it a go!! These are my first shots. We will be doing some more shoots.


These are all really good and I'm sure your granddaughter is delighted with them. I'm sure they are something she will always keep and remember fondly. Of all of them #2 is my favorite.

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Aug 30, 2018 11:30:21   #
donald4u Loc: California
 
I like the second and last. The shows real warmth. But with that said. It doesn't really matter . You will know and feel when she says". Wow!!! Thank you Grand Dad.

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