Chillin' in the sunshine
Aug 10, 2018 20:26:39 #
Taken on a spring morning at the Old Allegheny Park in Pittsburgh
Aug 10, 2018 20:51:40 #
Aug 10, 2018 21:27:17 #
Aug 11, 2018 06:34:16 #
I think a tighter crop would let one engage this interaction, and be a much more interesting photo. I feel like I am much too far away to get much out of it. Its about the people, not the place. My opinion.
Aug 11, 2018 08:23:31 #
Aug 11, 2018 09:14:53 #
fergmark wrote:
I think a tighter crop would let one engage this interaction, and be a much more interesting photo. I feel like I am much too far away to get much out of it. Its about the people, not the place. My opinion.
Thanks for your opinion - it was spot on! Here's the image with additional cropping.
Aug 11, 2018 10:06:40 #
Yes! I had tried even cropping in very close, but that is tossing most of the picture. Hadn't occurred to me to crop as you did. The message I get here is just a simple and pure one. Heres two people who like and respect each other. Very comfortable friends. Good simple story. You might try a little shadow recovery also for the benefit of the figure on the right.
Aug 11, 2018 15:06:00 #
Aug 11, 2018 16:28:03 #
When I read the comment to crop, I thought you would lose the sense of the park. But after seeing the cropped photo, I agree, it is much better and you don’t lose the feeling of the Park. And excellent choice of B&W!
Aug 12, 2018 09:14:39 #
SueScott wrote:
Taken on a spring morning at the Old Allegheny Park in Pittsburgh
That's nice, I really like the download.
Aug 12, 2018 14:02:07 #
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