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Jun 12, 2018 06:07:10   #
Snap Shot Loc: California
 
Topic was Moonbow in Yosemite
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It was cloudy this year!
It was cloudy this year!...
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Jun 12, 2018 06:53:05   #
Georgews Loc: Wellington, New Zealand
 
What is the title? Can't decipher the fancy text. Simplest is best.

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Jun 12, 2018 07:33:04   #
Jerry G Loc: Waterford, Michigan and Florida
 
Very nice, well done.

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Jun 12, 2018 07:40:27   #
Stephan G
 
Snap Shot wrote:
Topic was Moonbow in Yosemite
Comments Welcomed!


Sub-sub-title "Jump!"?


The font does make it hard to comprehend the title quickly. Also the placement of it makes it difficult to read. I would drop shadow the lettering to make it stand out. I would shrink the font and place "Moonbow" on the mist. Shrink the sub title font and run it across below in block letters, perhaps using the present font to emphasize "Lemings".

Like any book cover, it should be a brief, enticing glimpse of what is to come.

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Jun 12, 2018 08:14:03   #
Snap Shot Loc: California
 
Georgews wrote:
What is the title? Can't decipher the fancy text. Simplest is best.


Thanks for stopping by Georgews! The Title is Moonbow! It's always nice to see a new visitor!

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Jun 12, 2018 08:15:52   #
Snap Shot Loc: California
 
Stephan G wrote:
Sub-sub-title "Jump!"?


The font does make it hard to comprehend the title quickly. Also the placement of it makes it difficult to read. I would drop shadow the lettering to make it stand out. I would shrink the font and place "Moonbow" on the mist. Shrink the sub title font and run it across below in block letters, perhaps using the present font to emphasize "Lemings".

Like any book cover, it should be a brief, enticing glimpse of what is to come.
Sub-sub-title "Jump!"? img src="https:... (show quote)


Thanks for the critique Stephan G! It's always nice to see a new visitor!

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Jun 12, 2018 08:16:37   #
Snap Shot Loc: California
 
Jerry G wrote:
Very nice, well done.


Thanks Jerry! I'm glad you approve!

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Jun 12, 2018 09:16:38   #
Cwilson341 Loc: Central Florida
 
Bill, the only thing this needs is to be downloaded. Your lettering becomes sharp and clearly defined! Unfortunately, the thumbnail versions don’t always shine through as they should.

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Jun 12, 2018 10:55:33   #
Snap Shot Loc: California
 
Cwilson341 wrote:
Bill, the only thing this needs is to be downloaded. Your lettering becomes sharp and clearly defined! Unfortunately, the thumbnail versions don’t always shine through as they should.


Thanks for the heads up Carol! I should have suggested that when posting!

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Jun 12, 2018 11:57:36   #
Stephan G
 
Snap Shot wrote:
Thanks for the heads up Carol! I should have suggested that when posting!



Thanks for your nods. Just wanted to mention that my suggestions were made after seeing the download. I looked at it from the idea of it being a cover for a presentation.

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Jun 12, 2018 12:01:00   #
Snap Shot Loc: California
 
Stephan G wrote:
Thanks for your nods. Just wanted to mention that my suggestions were made after seeing the download. I looked at it from the idea of it being a cover for a presentation.



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Jun 12, 2018 17:17:50   #
rlaugh Loc: Michigan & Florida
 
Fine job on this!!

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Jun 12, 2018 17:21:29   #
Snap Shot Loc: California
 
rlaugh wrote:
Fine job on this!!


Thanks Bob! Glad you like it!

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Jun 12, 2018 17:25:52   #
Sylvias Loc: North Yorkshire England
 
Excellent download and work Bill.

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Jun 12, 2018 17:33:04   #
Snap Shot Loc: California
 
Sylvias wrote:
Excellent download and work Bill.


Thank you so much Sylvia! I could have done a better job on the text!

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