Any or all guidance advice and feedback welcome....
If this is your first try, then you're on your way. This is a nice series. You've already caught onto what I consider a basic "rule" of street: if a joint bends, photograph it bent. I see all but your first photo follow this. Would suggest putting your center of interest more toward one side or the other, as that gives more of a feeling of "energy" to a photo. The last two photos do this, but numbers 5 and 6 are rather centered. (In the last two, although the more interesting character is almost centered, I consider the two people as a single unit.) It's hard to make suggestions because all-in-all, they're decent photos. Keep it up.
Voss wrote:
If this is your first try, then you're on your way. This is a nice series. You've already caught onto what I consider a basic "rule" of street: if a joint bends, photograph it bent. I see all but your first photo follow this. Would suggest putting your center of interest more toward one side or the other, as that gives more of a feeling of "energy" to a photo. The last two photos do this, but numbers 5 and 6 are rather centered. (In the last two, although the more interesting character is almost centered, I consider the two people as a single unit.) It's hard to make suggestions because all-in-all, they're decent photos. Keep it up.
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Thanks so much for the kind words and the advice. I will keep an eye on the positioning. It was a fun experience limiting my self to one prime and B&W for this 'experiment', I might be hooked!
I like them all, good work.
Some nice street shots there.
EdR
Loc: Gig Harbor, WA
I liked the series. I liked the second chess shot better than the first. I found the cut off head of the standing man a little distracting. Other than that color me envious.
EdR wrote:
I liked the series. I liked the second chess shot better than the first. I found the cut off head of the standing man a little distracting. Other than that color me envious.
Thanks for the nice feedback. I completely agree. I was kind of angry with myself about not paying attention to the head being cut off.
Love the interaction of the people. Excellent series for a first shot at street. I look forward to seeing more. You are well on your way.
MDicnMan wrote:
Any or all guidance advice and feedback welcome....
Very interesting set. I like the chess game in #2 :b
MDicnMan wrote:
Any or all guidance advice and feedback welcome....
I'm not an expert; but these are all pretty engaging photos. Very enjoyable.
Erich
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