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Try again. Zoo Photo Patas Monkeys
Dec 16, 2017 09:46:10   #
awis01
 
2nd try. I think I've got it now



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Dec 16, 2017 09:50:29   #
photophile Loc: Lakewood, Ohio, USA
 
awis01 wrote:
2nd try. I think I've got it now


Very appealing image of the mom and baby monkey.

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Dec 16, 2017 09:56:12   #
awis01
 
Thanks

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Dec 16, 2017 10:08:21   #
water falls Loc: Green Bay,Wi
 
Cute capture!

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Dec 16, 2017 10:32:00   #
CHG_CANON Loc: the Windy City
 
awis01 wrote:
Thank you. Always looking for feedback to improve pics


If you're serious about desiring feedback, the next important step is to attach images so they can be downloaded and examined in detail. This is done by storing the original, something not done with this example.

I'd crop this image a bit tighter and try placing the center line of the image running through the eyes of the adult. That may / may not work, but I think would be a minor improvement over the slightly off-center alignment of this version.

The most important change would be to revisit and tone down the noise processing. Without a version to download and inspect in detail as well as not having an original version, it's hard to say what has happened to create this version. But, it looks like the "smoothing" is greatly overdone, a typical result of overprocessing the noise.

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Dec 16, 2017 12:45:28   #
rgrenaderphoto Loc: Hollywood, CA
 
Ditto what CHG said about setting the download link. I wold crop the out of focus branch on the right completly, as it does nothing for the image and is distracting.

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Dec 16, 2017 13:41:34   #
awis01
 
Thank you. In the future I will set the download link

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Dec 16, 2017 13:44:17   #
awis01
 
Thanks

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Dec 16, 2017 13:45:08   #
awis01
 
Thanks. I'll revisit the smoothing.

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Dec 16, 2017 16:39:08   #
EllieLady Loc: So. CA, USA
 
awis01 wrote:
2nd try. I think I've got it now

Cute little simians...which zoo ???

FYI - - forums are always a learning experience because most of them seem to work differently.

Here on UHH, you have a 1 hour EDIT window (you will see the "Edit" hyperlink at the bottom of each of your posts if the edit option is still open for that post - - that is, if you are still within the one hour edit window).

Since your first post was 9:28 and your second post was 9:46, so you still were within that one hour - - had you known, you could have simply edited your first post rather than opening a second topic.

What many members do, even if they are beyond the edit window, is just continue posting on the original topic - - folks will look there, based on your title, and continue reading.

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Dec 16, 2017 17:00:29   #
awis01
 
Rosmond Gifford Zoo in Syracuse, NY. Thanks for the info on the 1 hour window. It is a learning experience.

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Dec 16, 2017 17:26:37   #
EllieLady Loc: So. CA, USA
 
awis01 wrote:
Rosmond Gifford Zoo in Syracuse, NY. Thanks for the info on the 1 hour window. It is a learning experience.

T Y & Y W - - glad to help...

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Dec 17, 2017 07:29:48   #
fourg1b2006 Loc: Long Island New York
 
Wow...what a great image....love that baby.

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Dec 17, 2017 11:54:41   #
UTMike Loc: South Jordan, UT
 
Nice capture!

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Dec 17, 2017 13:55:36   #
awis01
 
Thanks.Nice pups in your photo

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