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For tan-line lovers, again
Nov 14, 2017 18:41:55 #
Here is a third of the Asian girl. The tan lines don't show much here. Her hair had really nice reddish highlights.
Nov 14, 2017 21:08:19 #
I find this quite nice, but I wonder if a little less bending of the knees might have made for a more gentle body profile.
Nov 15, 2017 05:49:51 #
Stanhope wrote:
Here is a third of the Asian girl. The tan lines don't show much here. Her hair had really nice reddish highlights.
Nice image!!!!
I find the lighting well placed but a tad harsh, the background a bit distracting and the glare on edge of the table very distracting.
I also agree with John on the bend of her knees.
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Nov 15, 2017 05:55:05 #
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Nov 15, 2017 06:54:53 #
Knee bend doesn't bother me. Like the image but do agree light a tad to bright.
Nov 15, 2017 08:06:00 #
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Nov 15, 2017 09:19:53 #
That's false advertising. You headline with "For tan line lovers" and then have no tan lines and admit it. It's overexposed too. Why don't you retitle it to....
"Tan lines in Alaska"
"Tan lines in Alaska"
Nov 15, 2017 09:54:13 #
Tan lines can be taken out in Photoshop. I just did an example. Not too difficult if you have Photoshop.
Nov 15, 2017 12:12:04 #
Nov 15, 2017 16:20:47 #
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Nov 15, 2017 16:23:30 #
I agree the main light was too strong. It was over her,just out of view. She couldn't extend her legs...because she was actually on a bookshelf!
Nov 15, 2017 22:03:16 #
Stanhope wrote:
Here is a third of the Asian girl. The tan lines don't show much here. Her hair had really nice reddish highlights.
I'm not a fan of blown out highlights.
Nov 16, 2017 20:51:29 #
It’s not the knees, I think. I’ve done a very similar pose; although the lower leg was straighter, the upper leg was bent even more. Really brought out the shape of the buttock.
I think it’s the shoulder bending towards the hip that foreshortens the figure. Bringing the shoulder up would stretch the figure. IMHO
Nice work!
I think it’s the shoulder bending towards the hip that foreshortens the figure. Bringing the shoulder up would stretch the figure. IMHO
Nice work!
Nov 17, 2017 00:12:22 #
Oh my I like that! Hey now!!
I think it’s a good moody light/shadows composition. :)) Good job!
Room for improvement next time - a tad overexposed in the highlights. And what is that red square in the upper left of the frame?
I think it’s a good moody light/shadows composition. :)) Good job!
Room for improvement next time - a tad overexposed in the highlights. And what is that red square in the upper left of the frame?
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