Very dramatic photo. Compels the eye. The model has an appealing physique. The swirling cloth works here, and contrasts nicely with the strong curves of the model.
Bringing up the shadows might improve the the visual balance.
You have talent with studio lighting.
Keep up the good work.
Robeng wrote:
Not sure what effect you're trying to obtain. If you what to photograph her twirling the red fabric then I would go further back and set up your lights to match your aperture & shutter.
Here's an example of my friend twirling fabric at my studio.