picfan92 Loc: everywhere

general critique is very welcome



THANK YOU :)

snowbear

I like the first one, except for her missing right foot. I think the harshness of the sunlight helps set a mood.

I don't care for the second one at all - I really can't figure out what's going on or what you're trying to say, here.

The last one is interesting, if a bit overexposed. I'd get rid of the cloth behind the rear wheel.

Bobber Loc: Fredericksburg, Texas

Agree in general, though I have every confidence her right foot is fine without being exposed. I am satisfied with one set of toes. It'd be different if the loss were due to cropping instead of a natural positioning.

For the second I don't need to know everything that is going on; I don't look at myself much differently in that position. I do think the framing could be made to where a more interesting composition would come out of it. This one is too incomplete to make much of a statement. I'd like to see more of the hands and focus upon them. Hands can be exceedingly expressive.

Can't add or subtract from what was said about that last one. Kind of an interesting shot, though. Not your everyday image of someone and a motor cycle.

St3v3M Loc: 35,000 feet

I like the first one, except for the missing top of the door.

I get the second one, but get lost without a point of focus.

The last one is a bit overexposed. And that's one big bike.

tainkc Loc: Kansas City

Yes, the last one is overexposed and she needs to have a bare foot showing under her skirt.