Ms. Aeon Sharpe
CResQ
Loc: Cobble Hill, BC
Taken in my studio August 12th 2017.
Beautiful shots, perfect lighting. And the model ain't bad either.
CResQ
Loc: Cobble Hill, BC
rgrenaderphoto wrote:
Beautiful shots, perfect lighting. And the model ain't bad either.
Thank you Robert, much appreciated.
The top photograph is stunning. The lighting is perfectly balanced such that you feel like you could touch the screen and feel the softness of her skin. It is such a fine contrast you created with the black back ground. You captured her spirit, she's a fine model, you produced a fine photograph. Well done.
The top photograph is stunning. The lighting is perfectly balanced such that you feel like you could touch the screen and feel the softness of her skin. It is such a fine contrast you created with the black back ground. You captured her spirit, she's a fine model, you produced a fine photograph. Well done.
I love the skin tone and texture/ Beautiful model. Could bring a tad more brightness to the eyes.
Beautiful work overall...
Beautiful shots! I just don't get the piercing thing, but that's just me.
All the above positives... but to use a simple shower curtain... whoda-thunk?!? Great Idea !
jonsommer
Loc: Usually, somewhere on the U.S. west coast.
Hi Mark, like the others have said, there's an awful lot to like here as these are photos that let us know something personal about the model even though we've never met her. But, of course, almost everything could always be improved and because you have nailed all the technical aspects of these photos, I have a couple of emotional type observations to make: in the first photo the crop feels wrong to me, I understand the rule of thirds and all, but a crop that included her camera right shoulder and then if you added some background to camera left you would still be able to do a rule of thirds kind of crop and not cut off her shoulder - also, I wonder if she is a fellow body builder with huge tricepts on her camera left arm, either that or she has a huge welt on that arm - or something which doesn't look quite natural to my eyes. For the second photo, the wonderful personal intimacy of the first photo is lost by her looking away from the camera, so for me the personal connection is lost as her intense blue eyes are looking somewhere else other than at me.
These are beautiful shots. Love your model!
CResQ
Loc: Cobble Hill, BC
KGOldWolf wrote:
The top photograph is stunning. The lighting is perfectly balanced such that you feel like you could touch the screen and feel the softness of her skin. It is such a fine contrast you created with the black back ground. You captured her spirit, she's a fine model, you produced a fine photograph. Well done.
Thank you for your comments and observations, much appreciated.
CResQ
Loc: Cobble Hill, BC
Thank you for looking and commenting.
CResQ
Loc: Cobble Hill, BC
I appreciate the thumbs up, many thanks
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