A friend.
Jun 24, 2012 21:57:09 #
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Jun 25, 2012 10:16:29 #
hhhmmm - I like #1, shows some creativity there, #2 I don't know - I think I know what you were trying to do but the white light seems a little too white and #3 - good pose but wrong shoes I think plus I think it would have been better if you'd been a little further around the back of her.
Jun 25, 2012 12:43:21 #
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Jun 25, 2012 15:38:17 #
prestonphoto wrote:
hhhmmm - I like #1, shows some creativity there, #2 I don't know - I think I know what you were trying to do but the white light seems a little too white and #3 - good pose but wrong shoes I think plus I think it would have been better if you'd been a little further around the back of her.
Sounds like a bachelor to me - critizing a woman's shoes.
Jun 25, 2012 16:14:18 #
I'm at a loss for what you were trying for in #2? it looks almost like a self portrait for facebook (look at how her one arm comes out of the frame) also why the spot light on her nose and the rest of the image dark? Simply put it does not work.
#3 the face is to dark, the tilt of her head doesn't work as it give the appearance that she has no neck and her feet are positioned at strange angles. Plus the cracks in the brick need to be repaired. You also have the top of the door handle growing out of her head.
Out of these 3, #3 is my favorite and has the most potential.
* everyone please remember that posts should not be made regarding the subject's appearance. Please do not objectify women.
#3 the face is to dark, the tilt of her head doesn't work as it give the appearance that she has no neck and her feet are positioned at strange angles. Plus the cracks in the brick need to be repaired. You also have the top of the door handle growing out of her head.
Out of these 3, #3 is my favorite and has the most potential.
* everyone please remember that posts should not be made regarding the subject's appearance. Please do not objectify women.
Jun 25, 2012 22:31:14 #
number one works the best for me, i like the water spots and the colored lens flare. it is unusual and turns a cliche portrait into something different. different is good. shot #2 the spot light puts emphasis on her nose and makes it apear larger then it is. background does not add to the shot so should be blured, forceing attention back on your friend. shot 3 crop off the litle bit of the purple plant on the left. I like the emotion an attitude she displays. As for her shoes as my photo jedi master Yoda once told me " If fully man remain you want, criticize never shoes of woman" Ive tried to live by those words.
by the way MWAC, the only thing I would change in your last sentance is i would replace women with humans. men can be objectified and reduced to slabs of meat also. for proof i give you the chipendale dancers.
by the way MWAC, the only thing I would change in your last sentance is i would replace women with humans. men can be objectified and reduced to slabs of meat also. for proof i give you the chipendale dancers.
Aug 11, 2013 07:06:21 #
alann wrote:
Few shots of a friend
Just found this. Great job. I like the shot through the window the best.
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