Studio shoot
Aug 16, 2017 17:32:13 #
This model is my daughter Haylee Michele
Age 15 studio shoot.
Age 15 studio shoot.
1) Haylee Michele age 15 , shot at Studio 505 Antioch Ca. Photographed by me Nikon D3300
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2) Haylee Michele age 15, shot at Studio 505 Antioch Ca. Photographed by me Nikon D3300
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3) Haylee Michele age 15, shot at Studio 505 Antioch Ca photographed by me Nikon D3300
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4) Haylee Michele age 15, shot at Studio 505 Antioch Ca, photographed by me. nikon D3300
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5) Haylee Michele age 15, shot at Studio 505 Antioch Ca. Photographed by me Nikon D3300
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6) Haylee Michele age 15, shot at Studio 505 Antioch Ca. Photographed by me Nikon D3300
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7) Haylee Michele age 15, shot at Studio 505 Antioch Ca. Photographed by me Nikon D3300
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8) Haylee Michele age 15, shot at Studio 505 Antioch Ca. Photographed by me Nikon D3300
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9) Haylee Michele age 15, shot at Studio 505 Antioch Ca. Photographed by me Nikon D3300
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Aug 16, 2017 17:40:41 #
The hair light appears to be a tad hot. The photos look really nice, other than that.
--Bob
--Bob
Aug 16, 2017 17:42:45 #
MorrisT
Loc: Chattanooga, Tn.
kadams wrote:
This model is my daughter Haylee Michele
Age 15 studio shoot.
Age 15 studio shoot.
WOW, Beautiful young lady!
MorrisT
Aug 16, 2017 17:49:00 #
Pictures #s 4,7,9. I used Florence strobes behind the white back ground. First time working with studio lights.
Aug 16, 2017 17:56:30 #
Aug 16, 2017 17:56:49 #
Kimberly, I can imagine that was quite a fun experience, and a learning one too.
--Bob
--Bob
kadams wrote:
Pictures #s 4,7,9. I used Florence strobes behind the white back ground. First time working with studio lights.
Aug 16, 2017 18:06:58 #
Yep excellent work... shows a lot of love in every shot ,,. As stated already by Bob .. too much coming off the hair .., diffuse that down and case closed .. you are both lucky to have each other .., just wonderful ...,
Aug 16, 2017 20:24:53 #
Aug 16, 2017 22:36:06 #
Aug 17, 2017 06:12:26 #
Aug 17, 2017 07:55:01 #
Excellent posing and composition! The highlights are blown out on the first and fourth shots though.
Aug 17, 2017 09:16:03 #
Kimberly, first let me say that your shots of your daughter are stunning. She is a beautiful young woman. And now for critique....
Pic 1...The top of her head is cropped off, and the light has blown out her hair. The white scarf is a little to prominent. (Also, to blown out.)
Pic 2 The way her lips are open, it appears as though she has saliva just behind the lips.
Pic 3 Absolutely perfect
Pic 4 The pose is superb, but again the hair.
Pic 5 stunning shot.
Pic 6 Again, top of head is cropped off and bra strap is showing otherwise perfect shot.
Pic 7 As is no. 5 stunning
Pic 8 same as #s 5 & 7
Pic 9 just the bra strap showing.
Your shots are excellent. Poses are excellent as is the lighting.
Overall i would give
Rich...
P.S. Keep the shotgun by the front door....LOL
Pic 1...The top of her head is cropped off, and the light has blown out her hair. The white scarf is a little to prominent. (Also, to blown out.)
Pic 2 The way her lips are open, it appears as though she has saliva just behind the lips.
Pic 3 Absolutely perfect
Pic 4 The pose is superb, but again the hair.
Pic 5 stunning shot.
Pic 6 Again, top of head is cropped off and bra strap is showing otherwise perfect shot.
Pic 7 As is no. 5 stunning
Pic 8 same as #s 5 & 7
Pic 9 just the bra strap showing.
Your shots are excellent. Poses are excellent as is the lighting.
Overall i would give
Rich...
P.S. Keep the shotgun by the front door....LOL
Aug 17, 2017 09:45:39 #
Aug 17, 2017 11:57:47 #
Aug 17, 2017 12:02:35 #
@rich2236
Thank you so much for yout CC
The pictures with my daughters hair all blown out was the first time working with studio lights. A friend of mine owns a photography studio and set me free in it. Ive never done studio work before, always outdoors. She wanted to see how I posed my subjects. So I brought in my daughter and played. I hung onto those pics only because they were my very first shooting with lights, and I out right liked the poses.
That day was when i realized that my daughter has it. Has what it takes to model. She enjoys the camera and it shows.
That day shooting i really wasnt worried about removing hairbands, bra straps etc. My focus was how those studio light worked. They are very fun. Loved working with lighting. What a difference.
The picture you mentioned about the saliva on her lips. Its her teeth. One of her flaws are her teeth. She wont smile. Im trying to figure out how i can pay for her teeth to get fixed.
She does has agencies watching her on my instagram. My user name is Nikonshooter2017 if you would like to check out more of my work. I enjoy CC
It betters me. I like to hear what others see that i don't.
Thank you so much for taking time out to help me.
Kimberly
Thank you so much for yout CC
The pictures with my daughters hair all blown out was the first time working with studio lights. A friend of mine owns a photography studio and set me free in it. Ive never done studio work before, always outdoors. She wanted to see how I posed my subjects. So I brought in my daughter and played. I hung onto those pics only because they were my very first shooting with lights, and I out right liked the poses.
That day was when i realized that my daughter has it. Has what it takes to model. She enjoys the camera and it shows.
That day shooting i really wasnt worried about removing hairbands, bra straps etc. My focus was how those studio light worked. They are very fun. Loved working with lighting. What a difference.
The picture you mentioned about the saliva on her lips. Its her teeth. One of her flaws are her teeth. She wont smile. Im trying to figure out how i can pay for her teeth to get fixed.
She does has agencies watching her on my instagram. My user name is Nikonshooter2017 if you would like to check out more of my work. I enjoy CC
It betters me. I like to hear what others see that i don't.
Thank you so much for taking time out to help me.
Kimberly
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