Art is hidden in the shadows ...
george66 wrote:
London, England
Fantastic image!!!! George
Beautiful!!!!
Creative art... flesh is flesh, but artful flesh is special.
Nice--there's something sensual about it.
Leaves one with a lot of questions. I especially like that. Also clever with he texture of the blinds adjacent to the subject.
jonsommer
Loc: Usually, somewhere on the U.S. west coast.
I really like the colors you have achieved in this photo, most of them appear to have an inner glow of light that can't be explained, also, the different compositional elements are unexpected and therefore make it interesting to explore the whole photo. On the 'could be improved' side of the coin, I think just a touch of brightening around the right side of the figure to give a little more separation between the figure and the wall would make it a more interesting photo, as would a different crop, whereas now, a vertical line could be drawn through her abdomen, breast, and along the front of her thighs that is perfectly centered in the photo and there is room on the right side of the shot to trim about half of it without negatively affecting the rest of your composition and, if you do this, I think you would have a much more dynamic and much less static photo.
george66 wrote:
London, England
George, different excellent capture.
BboH
Loc: s of 2/21, Ellicott City, MD
jonsommer wrote:
I really like the colors you have achieved in this photo, most of them appear to have an inner glow of light that can't be explained, also, the different compositional elements are unexpected and therefore make it interesting to explore the whole photo. On the 'could be improved' side of the coin, I think just a touch of brightening around the right side of the figure to give a little more separation between the figure and the wall would make it a more interesting photo, as would a different crop, whereas now, a vertical line could be drawn through her abdomen, breast, and along the front of her thighs that is perfectly centered in the photo and there is room on the right side of the shot to trim about half of it without negatively affecting the rest of your composition and, if you do this, I think you would have a much more dynamic and much less static photo.
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I disagree with the brightening of the right and a "...different crop...". The dark wall balances the bright window with her right in the middle. To me, IO don't see how the balance could be any better - the lines you mention separates the offsetting light and dark and adds mystery to the image. Mystery is what, to me, makes a female image erotic and most times attreactive and beautiful
Great concept, well shot. Possibly too dark on the right for me.
I would say that the "art" is out of the window here? Image needs some work - is too dark, hard to recognize the subject and the photographer's intention - something the most important. Faint images under the window distract attention.
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