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Two by Two - Hunting under a bridge
Mar 5, 2017 03:27:43   #
robertjerl Loc: Corona, California
 
They are under a bridge about 50 yards away, all water in between so no getting closer. I should have had the extender on and even better (if I could afford it) an 800 mm. This a very major crop, things are starting to break down. There were a few blurs from dead ivy hanging from the bridge, I tried clone and spot healing to remove or hide those. My work will stand up to casual glance at a print on the wall but not pixel peeping or long study. I did use a denoise app, resize the final image and increase the pixel count.
I like the similar poses and the double reflections. I did a couple of seconds of slow burst, but this frame I like the best, they were moving slowly forward as they hunted, in step like a drill team.
The green water is in the shade under the bridge and the tan water is in sunlight reflecting the banks and dead vegetation of the pond on the other side of the bridge.
7DII, 100-400L mk II @ 400, 1/800 @ f/7.1, ISO 320 handheld with a post to lean against.


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Mar 5, 2017 12:45:55   #
Pierre H.J. Dumais Loc: Mississippi Mills, Ont.
 
Lots of eye appeal here Jerry, and that's what really counts.
Pierre

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Mar 5, 2017 13:22:31   #
Bob Yankle Loc: Burlington, NC
 
Pierre H.J. Dumais wrote:
Lots of eye appeal here Jerry, and that's what really counts.
Pierre
I'm with the Pierre, the immediate appeal is nice. Almost geometric in its conformation. And while I am not a pixel-peeper by any means, if this were mine, I'd try to get rid of the black line in the water immediately above and the right of the bird at the right (and the small black spot coming out of its tush). I'm fairly convinced this would make the birds pop even more against their brighter background.

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Mar 5, 2017 14:47:19   #
robertjerl Loc: Corona, California
 
Pierre H.J. Dumais wrote:
Lots of eye appeal here Jerry, and that's what really counts.
Pierre


Thank you Pierre.

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Mar 5, 2017 14:54:04   #
robertjerl Loc: Corona, California
 
Bob Yankle wrote:
I'm with the Pierre, the immediate appeal is nice. Almost geometric in its conformation. And while I am not a pixel-peeper by any means, if this were mine, I'd try to get rid of the black line in the water immediately above and the right of the bird at the right (and the small black spot coming out of its tush). I'm fairly convinced this would make the birds pop even more against their brighter background.


Thank you.
You mean something like this?


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Mar 5, 2017 14:56:49   #
Bob Yankle Loc: Burlington, NC
 
robertjerl wrote:
Thank you.
You mean something like this?
Mo bettah Brah! (said with a Hawaiian accent). That was it.

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Mar 6, 2017 06:12:55   #
rlaugh Loc: Michigan & Florida
 
A nice uncluttered shot!!!

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Mar 6, 2017 13:14:10   #
nanaval Loc: Cornwall
 
Very good and I like the re worked one you have done with the black bits behind the birds taken out, makes them in your face with no distractions....

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Mar 6, 2017 14:41:28   #
robertjerl Loc: Corona, California
 
Bob Yankle wrote:
Mo bettah Brah! (said with a Hawaiian accent). That was it.

OK, I also posted a thread of several variations using Simplify. http://www.uglyhedgehog.com/t-446108-1.html

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Mar 6, 2017 14:41:41   #
robertjerl Loc: Corona, California
 
rlaugh wrote:
A nice uncluttered shot!!!


Thank you

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Mar 6, 2017 14:42:05   #
robertjerl Loc: Corona, California
 
nanaval wrote:
Very good and I like the re worked one you have done with the black bits behind the birds taken out, makes them in your face with no distractions....


Thanks a lot.

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