Lady in Red
Feb 20, 2017 11:39:20 #
Looking for feedback and suggestions. Which photo is more pleasing to the eye? Suggestions for better lighting? Taken in Fort in San Juan.
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Thank you for viewing.
Feb 20, 2017 11:44:53 #
I prefer the second one. Her stepping off to the side creates some mystery as to where she's going, and the image is straighter. Nice work.
Feb 20, 2017 12:01:52 #
Feb 20, 2017 12:10:51 #
I prefer the first, though would like to see it straightened just a little. The figure draws the viewer into the succession of arches.
Feb 20, 2017 15:39:16 #
Feb 21, 2017 07:59:53 #
ssohl wrote:
Looking for feedback and suggestions. Which photo is more pleasing to the eye? Suggestions for better lighting? Taken in Fort in San Juan.
Thank you for viewing.
Thank you for viewing.
I love both of these images but the first one is very pleasing to the eye!
Feb 21, 2017 12:21:33 #
Like them both. Each transmits a slightly different feel in the posture and position of the woman. Both need straightening, a thankless task that seem to be made more difficult when cropping. Excellent eye for composition on this one.
Feb 21, 2017 14:20:00 #
The first is a nice shot - but needs to be straightened to the left. It has good depth, leading line. And eye appeal. The second is OK but would be more effective if the subject was walking toward the camera.
Feb 21, 2017 18:49:38 #
I just love the first one. The red is just enough to contrast with the white, good work.
Feb 21, 2017 19:51:59 #
My vote is for the first image. Like the way it kind of leads you down the "tunnel".
Don
Don
Feb 21, 2017 20:55:19 #
Chuy
Loc: OUT OF TOWN
The photo is not balanced, there would be some potential with a tighter crop but you cut the right side of the photo out. JMHO
Feb 24, 2017 06:38:51 #
Feb 27, 2017 21:17:51 #
Mar 2, 2017 16:07:15 #
Thank you so much Chuy! I love it done this way. My sister-in-law and I were taking the same shot but she waited for the woman to get out of the way. I thought she added something to the picture. Your alterations are perfect!
Mar 2, 2017 18:41:56 #
Chuy
Loc: OUT OF TOWN
ssohl wrote:
Thank you so much Chuy! I love it done this way. My sister-in-law and I were taking the same shot but she waited for the woman to get out of the way. I thought she added something to the picture. Your alterations are perfect!
She is the picture, so glad you like the alteration.
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