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Feb 12, 2017 15:13:21   #
backroadgirl
 
Hi everyone,
Last day to get entered into my clubs slideshow competition, The theme is Water in all of its forms.
Posted a few choices a while back and with feedback here and elsewhere I have narrowed my choices.
I need to pick two photos to enter. Feed back and critiques are always welcome. I do know the colors
and details are popped up, this is on purpose especially for slideshow, they seem to lose a little on
projector screen.

shortcave
shortcave...

water play
water play...



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Feb 12, 2017 15:13:54   #
backroadgirl
 
For some reason the cave is showing up much darker on here.

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Feb 12, 2017 15:30:06   #
G Brown Loc: Sunny Bognor Regis West Sussex UK
 
#1 is definitely out - really dark shadow does nothing for that scene,
#2 you have amputated child's arm and added a spurious hand. Colour is way off
#3 is the most pleasing....you need a judge that likes abstract or Monet.

have fun....its only my 2 pence

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Feb 12, 2017 15:50:37   #
PixelStan77 Loc: Vermont/Chicago
 
backroadgirl wrote:
Hi everyone,
Last day to get entered into my clubs slideshow competition, The theme is Water in all of its forms.
Posted a few choices a while back and with feedback here and elsewhere I have narrowed my choices.
I need to pick two photos to enter. Feed back and critiques are always welcome. I do know the colors
and details are popped up, this is on purpose especially for slideshow, they seem to lose a little on
projector screen.


I would go with 1 and 3.

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Feb 12, 2017 16:32:02   #
backroadgirl
 
Like I mentioned not sure why the cave is showing up so dark on here. Is is much brighter in PS and LR

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Feb 12, 2017 16:37:05   #
photophile Loc: Lakewood, Ohio, USA
 
backroadgirl wrote:
Hi everyone,
Last day to get entered into my clubs slideshow competition, The theme is Water in all of its forms.
Posted a few choices a while back and with feedback here and elsewhere I have narrowed my choices.
I need to pick two photos to enter. Feed back and critiques are always welcome. I do know the colors
and details are popped up, this is on purpose especially for slideshow, they seem to lose a little on
projector screen.


My favorite is short cave.

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Feb 13, 2017 09:51:53   #
crafterwantabe Loc: Mn
 
Love the first one... the second is a fun shot shows the children totally enjoying themselves...

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Feb 13, 2017 11:01:34   #
Wanda Krack Loc: Tennessee, USA
 
Lighten up the mid-tones in #1, although it appears you may have had some burn-out in the upper right that you darkened? With a different editing, this one has some nice lines and shapes.
#3 would be my pick, although as someone else mentioned, it all depends on the judges and what kind of images appeal to them/him/her.

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Feb 13, 2017 23:16:14   #
sailorsmom Loc: Souderton, PA
 
I like the first two, backroadgirl, but the first one would need to be lightened a bit.

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