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Trip - Other Poses Sitting on the bed
Feb 5, 2017 14:45:27 #
romanticf16
Loc: Commerce Twp, MI
I find the difference in her appearance from frame 1 to 3 interesting. Hair up and she looks younger. Keep up the good work
Feb 5, 2017 14:48:59 #
chazz4623
Loc: Prairieville, La
You've posted several of this pretty lady, all seem out of focus in the area of her face, the center of interest of the shots. Also, some blending of the dark areas under her eyes would improve the shots,IMHO
Feb 5, 2017 16:06:19 #
Waltchilds, I like the way the 3 photos tell a story. The lines in them are interesting. I wish her smile said more then that she is bored. Maybe she is thinking "do I really have to go out tonight/". That concept works for me. While her outfit is erotic, her attitude is not erotic.
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Feb 5, 2017 16:08:30 #
Feb 5, 2017 19:11:58 #
Robeng
Loc: California
waltchilds wrote:
Here are some other poses with Trip sitting on the bed. Comments appreciated.
Waltchilds,
Thank you for posting your work. I wish more would.
I like your model, she seems to have the right attitude and outfit. Some how I feel your lighting is a little off for me. Its flat with no sense of shadows for sexiness and tease. I would have opened the curtains and shot her with just the window light. On the first image, I would have crop in more on Trip and show less of the bed. The second image, same for cropping on the bed but less on Trip's shoes, and the third image I would have cropped in more like you did on your response. When you cropped in more on Trip the viewer focuses on Trip and not all that other space with the window & bed.
I added a couple of examples.
Rob
Feb 5, 2017 21:03:08 #
Robeng wrote:
Waltchilds, br br Thank you for posting your work... (show quote)
Thanks, Rob, for all your helpful comments. I will take your advice. Yes the light was flat so under the conditions they set up for us to shoot there was not much I could do in the 5 minutes I was given to shoot my shots. And, the window was fake as there was actually no windows in this studio. The light coming from the fake window was from the LED lights.
Thanks, again for commenting and by the way, I love your shots you posted here, really nice, first class work.
Feb 5, 2017 21:23:57 #
romanticf16
Loc: Commerce Twp, MI
waltchilds wrote:
Thanks, Rob, for all your helpful comments. I will take your advice. Yes the light was flat so under the conditions they set up for us to shoot there was not much I could do in the 5 minutes I was given to shoot my shots. And, the window was fake as there was actually no windows in this studio. The light coming from the fake window was from the LED lights.
Thanks, again for commenting and by the way, I love your shots you posted here, really nice, first class work.
Thanks, again for commenting and by the way, I love your shots you posted here, really nice, first class work.
Your shooting conditions help explain a lot. It is difficult to establish a great relationship with a model in 5 minutes! I'm confident your results would be much better if you hired her for a session by yourself. And most shooters forget to compliment the model between poses!
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Apr 30, 2021 19:30:49 #
May 2, 2021 23:00:15 #
waltchilds wrote:
Here are some other poses with Trip sitting on the bed. Comments appreciated.
I think she has a great face. I bet when she smiles, she lights up a room. Nice shape too.
May 2, 2021 23:29:02 #
She's pretty. Nice face and shape. I bet when she smiles, she lights up the room. Nice choice of loungerie. I like the lighting.
May 24, 2021 18:24:17 #
twr25
Loc: New Jersey
Probably the most trouble I have with models is the facial expression ... the photos are technically sound and beautiful. A bit of post tweaking would be helpful on #1 ... having her look up would really make this shot. Sharpening her eyes and bringing out the color would help. Seems like she's annoyed or ??? in her expression. She is beautiful and should convey that in her modeling. Otherwise very nice work
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May 24, 2021 18:43:19 #
RichieC
Loc: Adirondacks
I think she is quite beautiful... some soft focus, more careful on the hair, and mood lighting... she needs to look like she is having fun. But I like her...
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