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Nov 2, 2016 17:28:30 #
Nov 2, 2016 17:31:59 #
Robeng wrote:
I love this girl, Thought I post another image of her.
Whats not to love. Nice image Rob.
Nov 2, 2016 18:04:13 #
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Nov 2, 2016 18:09:05 #
Twardlow
Loc: Arkansas
Robeng wrote:
I love this girl, Thought I post another image of her.
Love the background, but don't love the door or the floor; they detract.
Don't mean to be abrupt, but there it is....
Nov 2, 2016 18:33:04 #
Twardlow wrote:
Love the background, but don't love the door or the floor; they detract.
Don't mean to be abrupt, but there it is....
Don't mean to be abrupt, but there it is....
Different strokes for different folks...
I think the door balances the crack (...in the wall...
), and the colour of the door matches the skin tones under the shawl. I think the floor anchors the scene, especially since the dark areas of the floor match the colour of the shoes, the shawl and the crack (...in the wall...). To me, everything is in good balance.Conclusion: I like it all.
Nov 2, 2016 18:45:01 #
Twardlow
Loc: Arkansas
JohnFrim wrote:
Different strokes for different folks...
I think the door balances the crack (...in the wall...), and the colour of the door matches the skin tones under the shawl. I think the floor anchors the scene, especially since the dark areas of the floor match the colour of the shoes, the shawl and the crack (...in the wall...). To me, everything is in good balance.
Conclusion: I like it all.
I think the door balances the crack (...in the wall...
), and the colour of the door matches the skin tones under the shawl. I think the floor anchors the scene, especially since the dark areas of the floor match the colour of the shoes, the shawl and the crack (...in the wall...). To me, everything is in good balance.Conclusion: I like it all.
Good for you; welcome to your opinion.
I stand behind mine.
Meaning no offense to photographer....
Nov 2, 2016 19:12:14 #
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Nov 3, 2016 06:58:08 #
lukan
Loc: Chicago, IL
Rob, Vendi is so easy to love because she seems very comfortable with no clothes on in front of a camera. Plus, she's beautiful and has great assets (shaved makes a BIG difference!). The background is a little hot but my eyes are naturally drawn to her, and only her left leg looks a little blown out. I love the mood she portrays: HAPPY!
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Nov 3, 2016 08:39:21 #
A smiling face floating above a beautiful feminine body, what is not to love. Perhaps though, a tad tighter crop camera left eliminating the door frame, but all in all a superb art nude image. Well done....
Nov 3, 2016 09:17:12 #
To all of you suggesting the door needs to go... doesn't the bolt (closed) and the lock (closed) add to the mystique? What if the hasp was open and lock hanging in the loop -- would that not convey a slightly different message? The door speaks to me and is part of the overall image.
Nov 3, 2016 09:24:33 #
JohnFrim wrote:
To all of you suggesting the door needs to go... doesn't the bolt (closed) and the lock (closed) add to the mystique? What if the hasp was open and lock hanging in the loop -- would that not convey a slightly different message? The door speaks to me and is part of the overall image.
JohnFrim..I certainly respect and appreciate the way you see this image but to me the "story" here has nothing to do with the frame and everything to do with the beautiful model. If I had shot this and wanted the frame to mean something I would have posed Vendi directly in front of or at least much closer to the frame..but that's just me....;~)
Nov 3, 2016 10:41:27 #
Twardlow
Loc: Arkansas
JohnFrim wrote:
To all of you suggesting the door needs to go... doesn't the bolt (closed) and the lock (closed) add to the mystique? What if the hasp was open and lock hanging in the loop -- would that not convey a slightly different message? The door speaks to me and is part of the overall image.
It's too far off to the side and a distraction. If she were involved with it, perhaps you would have something.
She needs to stand on something to keep the entire background stucco, no floor visible.
I'm really taken with the stucco as a background.
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