Flyaway Composite
Oct 18, 2016 10:10:34 #
For Your Consideration- Maybe a tee shirt design for the gals?
Oct 18, 2016 11:21:31 #
Frank2013
Loc: San Antonio, TX. & Milwaukee, WI.
While technically well done Mr. Spad, there’s just not much here to hold my interest…..may be plenty for someone else.
Oct 18, 2016 11:41:16 #
Billyspad wrote:
For Your Consideration- Maybe a tee shirt design for the gals?
Imagining it as a tshirt actually increases its appeal for me. As a photographic art image, it is less intriguing as it seems too much white/light area for a standard print or screen presentation. It seems well handled from the compositing standpoint. My personal preference for composites of people, particularly of young model-type women, is to have almost none of the dark texture effect showing on the face, it seems distracting and unattractive to have those creepy lines, and I end up looking at them instead of the whole image. That's cool work with the butterflies.
Oct 18, 2016 12:31:19 #
Just about works for me. The butterfly next to her face seems to spoil the outline of her lovely profile and I think it would be better moved away from her face a little bit.
Oct 19, 2016 06:05:59 #
Frank2013 wrote:
While technically well done Mr. Spad, there’s just not much here to hold my interest…..may be plenty for someone else.
Appreciate you dropping by Frank
Oct 19, 2016 06:09:10 #
minniev wrote:
Imagining it as a tshirt actually increases its ap... (show quote)
If it was a standard image I would have added a background but kept it simplistic as I thought it more suitable as a tee shirt image. Looking at it again I tend to agree about the stuff on the face. Thank you for calling by min.
Oct 19, 2016 06:11:05 #
R.G. wrote:
Just about works for me. The butterfly next to her face seems to spoil the outline of her lovely profile and I think it would be better moved away from her face a little bit.
Do not worry that butterfly can soon fly to another location R.G. Thank you for calling by my friend.
Oct 19, 2016 15:30:46 #
Billyspad wrote:
For Your Consideration- Maybe a tee shirt design for the gals?
I can see the t-shirt intent Billy, but I don't think this is to your usual high standard. Others have mentioned the face problems, but there's also an uncertain bit of compositing work around the ear area and the back of the slip - as if you were not quite sure what to do? Also, under the chin, at the junction with the neck, there's a peculiar triangle with a miniature rabbit character in it??
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