Nice work, but it seems a little cluttered. Could you take off the area to the left of the stroller and not lose the essence of the photo?
I think a tight crop from the upper right corner to just under the baby's bottom (mother's right hand) would better concentrate the mother's facial intensity. Just a thought.. Great shot!
Voss wrote:
Comfort is needed.
Thanks, jaymatt and bobbennett. And thanks for taking the time to assess the photo. I agree that the tighter crop works, probably better than the one I used. As far as cropping close to her face, it does highlight her expression, but it doesn't really define her situation. It does work as a street portrait.
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