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Sep 13, 2016 06:45:44 #
Well posed, nipple profile, lighting emphasis on upper bod and face well done. Kudos, Robeng
Would have added a tad more dark space at the elbow... I was criticized at camera club more than once for framing too tight...
Would have added a tad more dark space at the elbow... I was criticized at camera club more than once for framing too tight...
Sep 13, 2016 07:06:27 #
Mighty fine...but we may have to have a naming convention. I did not notice the poster and expected benttree's Liz. Two great but very different models. 
Sep 13, 2016 08:30:36 #
Robeng wrote:
One of my favorite peps, love her in everyway.
The Lighting Looks Good. Depending on how I tilt my screen on my laptop, could it be that there are perhaps a spot or two that are just a tad too 'hot' with possible specular highlights (hair, forehead, camera left arm, and possible camera right breast)? Not really a criticism, but merely a question and wondering how it is on your screen in full image mode? Nice pose, and facial expression.
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Tom
Sep 13, 2016 08:55:51 #
Robeng wrote:
One of my favorite peps, love her in everyway.
One of mine also. I have been lucky enough to have been in two workshops with this Houston princess, just shot one a couple of months back. I will offer no critique as IMHO it is impossible to take anything less than a superlative picture of this lovely and very personable model.
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Sep 13, 2016 09:04:07 #
davefales wrote:
Mighty fine...but we may have to have a naming convention. I did not notice the poster and expected benttree's Liz. Two great but very different models.
So are you disappointed?? LOL
Sep 13, 2016 09:56:39 #
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Sep 13, 2016 11:20:20 #
Robeng wrote:
One of my favorite peps, love her in everyway.
Rob,
You are very close to capturing a model in “Fine Art" form, you need just a tiny touch of improvement in lighting technique.
The direction and placement of lights is working very well to form shading, form, shape, and depth.
It appears your key light is below and to the left of the model and illuminating up and into her face. This produces some great modeling of her natural shape, but the distance between her and the lights have captured hot spots on her forearms, forehead, and blonde hair.
Keep in mind the inverse square law pertaining to light and move the key light back about ½ to ¾ the present distance.
Michael G
Sep 13, 2016 11:55:22 #
Sep 13, 2016 14:35:25 #
Robeng wrote:
One of my favorite peps, love her in everyway.
Yes, Liz could very quickly become one of my favorites if I just caved in and didn't resist!! LoL
Very nice Model and nice pose. Good to see a black background on this one.
On my phone I see a bit of orange in her arms and face. Maybe a graduated filter and desaturated just slightly. Beautiful shot and nice job!!
SS
Sep 13, 2016 16:07:04 #
foathog wrote:
So are you disappointed?? LOL
Well, yes. I expect young models to be gorgeous and sexy, but I get excited when an older woman is photographed as the gorgeous and sexy woman that she is.
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