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May 17, 2012 15:18:38 #
May 17, 2012 15:21:38 #
Nice shots. They capture the mood and emotion. I'd like the 1st one better if the subject's face ws visable in the mirror.
May 17, 2012 15:22:36 #
yea would have been nice :)
photoninja1 wrote:
Nice shots. They capture the mood and emotion. I'd like the 1st one better if the subject's face ws visable in the mirror.
May 17, 2012 15:23:07 #
How are you doing your b/w conversations? It looks like you are using a preset/action and there is no thought to the process. They look more grey/grey than black/white.
#1 - Her face should have been turned a little more toward the camera, or her reflection should have been visible in the mirror.
#2 - You have a bench, dock and trees growing out of her head. The processing is a little to heavy handing for my taste. Her face looks to be a little to dark. The skin could be underexposed by a 1/2 stop, it's hard to tell due to the processing.
#3 - The conversation is muddy and there seems to be some noise.
#4 - Her face is underexposed, but it's a fun shot and I like it.
#5 - the shot looks stiff, it's best to get them pre-kiss, just before their lips touch. It makes for better facial expressions. His suit is blown out badly and they have some harsh shadows on their face.
#6 - Your skin tones are off, both their faces look not only red but underexposed. She also has some leaves growing out of her head. I like the pose and the eye contact.
#1 - Her face should have been turned a little more toward the camera, or her reflection should have been visible in the mirror.
#2 - You have a bench, dock and trees growing out of her head. The processing is a little to heavy handing for my taste. Her face looks to be a little to dark. The skin could be underexposed by a 1/2 stop, it's hard to tell due to the processing.
#3 - The conversation is muddy and there seems to be some noise.
#4 - Her face is underexposed, but it's a fun shot and I like it.
#5 - the shot looks stiff, it's best to get them pre-kiss, just before their lips touch. It makes for better facial expressions. His suit is blown out badly and they have some harsh shadows on their face.
#6 - Your skin tones are off, both their faces look not only red but underexposed. She also has some leaves growing out of her head. I like the pose and the eye contact.
May 17, 2012 23:40:10 #
May 18, 2012 10:34:39 #
May 18, 2012 10:38:17 #
MWAC wrote:
How are you doing your b/w conversations? It look... (show quote)
I would agree and only add;
Get a book on lighting and learn how to light correctly. (either natural light and reflectors or speedlights.
Don't just wing it.
"Portraiture tips and Techniques" by Wayne Radford.
May 18, 2012 17:17:37 #
isisbaby1987 wrote:
what do you think of these
Good work, keep at it, you have the makings of a very good photographer.
May 18, 2012 22:43:13 #
I like 5
Wild hair shot would have been good if exposure was lightened
you are working at it and that is a good thing plus you are asking for critiquing and that is the best thing. Taking advice can be tough but hey it is free and you asked.. All will make you better. Good job out of you.
I like what others have commented take them and use the advice.
Good luck!
Wild hair shot would have been good if exposure was lightened
you are working at it and that is a good thing plus you are asking for critiquing and that is the best thing. Taking advice can be tough but hey it is free and you asked.. All will make you better. Good job out of you.
I like what others have commented take them and use the advice.
Good luck!
May 19, 2012 00:34:59 #
May 19, 2012 21:58:49 #
i always do lol and i have needed to work on my lighting for a while i dont mind any advice thats why i like this site people actually tell me whats wrong and not oh that looks good or whatever i like to know what i can do better everything ive learned has been self taught don't have time to do any schooling at the moment so this is the next best thing :) so on here can be a lil blunt but its cool they are still trying to help and thats all i ask is for help....
Dwayne50021 wrote:
I like 5
Wild hair shot would have been good if exposure was lightened
you are working at it and that is a good thing plus you are asking for critiquing and that is the best thing. Taking advice can be tough but hey it is free and you asked.. All will make you better. Good job out of you.
I like what others have commented take them and use the advice.
Good luck!
Wild hair shot would have been good if exposure was lightened
you are working at it and that is a good thing plus you are asking for critiquing and that is the best thing. Taking advice can be tough but hey it is free and you asked.. All will make you better. Good job out of you.
I like what others have commented take them and use the advice.
Good luck!
May 19, 2012 22:03:51 #
May 19, 2012 22:07:23 #
GrandmaJoy
Loc: North Carolina
I like the color in NO. 2. It looks vintage. I like all the pictures. You do very well at capturing the moment.
May 19, 2012 22:16:47 #
its funny you say that cause she did he had a week package went four out of the seven days and she was super dark thats a big reason she is really dark lol i still could have used some more lighting
joe west wrote:
the girl, looks like she had a bad visit at a tanning booth
May 19, 2012 22:17:36 #
thank you
GrandmaJoy wrote:
I like the color in NO. 2. It looks vintage. I like all the pictures. You do very well at capturing the moment.
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