personally, I am in MUCH favor of the vignetting of the background, ESPECIALLY for the purpose of, not only removing unwarranted info, but to drastically need to further PP softening/blurring/etc. other unnecessary "details" and greatly concentrate the REAL focus of the subject of the composure!
Job well done!!
I love it! She is beautiful. Shows a lot of character and looks like a natural at posing.
I would like to see you move the light on the left back away from the subject and/or stop down maybe one stop. Better yet put that light on the right side and move it a little forward plus back it away. You will bring more attention to her face.
I get what the others are saying about the size distortion at that angle with a shorter lens, but I personally don't have a problem with it in this photo. I would just move the lighting a little.
Sprocket wrote:
I love it! She is beautiful. Shows a lot of character and looks like a natural at posing.
I would like to see you move the light on the left back away from the subject and/or stop down maybe one stop. Better yet put that light on the right side and move it a little forward plus back it away. You will bring more attention to her face.
I get what the others are saying about the size distortion at that angle with a shorter lens, but I personally don't have a problem with it in this photo. I would just move the lighting a little.
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I just realized how confusing my statement is saying to move the lighting forward and back it away. What I meant to say is to move the light towards her front plus back it a farther distance from her body. I need to learn to proofread before I hit send. LOL
Benttree wrote:
I am new in here, do like get creative critics on to the image.
Lots of technical suggestions no need to add more.
I like the image, she's clearly a little older but you did well, it's seductive, I like her hint of a smile, catchlights, and the black, panties and nothing really showing .. all left to the imagination. Very Good!
One distraction for me is the very bright area in the upper left, it pulls my eye away from the main subject.
Like the pose. Like the model. Love the expression. A little heavy on the light from camera left, eats away the edges of the form - and it's too nice a one to do that.
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