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Jul 9, 2016 16:15:57 #
I'm really glad I found this section. I had some fun with this one, and I hope that comes through in the image.
Jul 10, 2016 05:37:48 #
I don't get it. Too much emphasis on the trees and hillside. What is the purpose of the models, just to say that it's nude photo?
Jul 10, 2016 05:51:34 #
buckwheat wrote:
I'm really glad I found this section. I had some fun with this one, and I hope that comes through in the image.
I must agree with Dziadzi.
You have a lovely model, and the images don't do her justice. these are images that anyone could take. Get creative, better lighting, less of the land scape etc.
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Jul 10, 2016 07:27:46 #
On the download everything is out of focus. Close down the lens and focus on the models eyes.
Jul 10, 2016 10:45:10 #
Thanks for the comments and constructive criticism. I made this composite a couple of years ago but always wondered if I missed the mark. But I'm still learning.
Jul 10, 2016 11:31:25 #
chazz4623
Loc: Prairieville, La
The comments are pretty accurate, but I must compliment you for using a model who is older than the 18yr old nymphet. Women shouldnt become invisible as they mature, they should be celebrated.
Jul 10, 2016 21:22:10 #
buckwheat wrote:
Thanks for the comments and constructive criticism. I made this composite a couple of years ago but always wondered if I missed the mark. But I'm still learning.
We all have much to learn or are to pig-headed to believe that.
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Jul 10, 2016 21:22:53 #
chazz4623 wrote:
The comments are pretty accurate, but I must compliment you for using a model who is older than the 18yr old nymphet. Women shouldnt become invisible as they mature, they should be celebrated.
Let's hear it for ALL women.
Jul 11, 2016 11:51:00 #
I like it Buckwheat. This reminds me of my backpacking in the Colorado Mountains. We met some women who were backpacking, but not like this. This is a cool composite. I think the composition of the women is nicely done. nature, women, natural light that looks normal, just like you would see it if you were walking thru the woods int he middle of the day.
Jul 11, 2016 12:00:52 #
Funny you mention Colorado. I was born in Boulder (a long time ago)and my the time I got back from the Air Force one got used to seeing naked people in the woods. I was married at the time to a very jealous woman, who quit going on hikes with me because of that. Fortunately we parted company.
TheStarvingArtist wrote:
I like it Buckwheat. This reminds me of my backpacking in the Colorado Mountains. We met some women who were backpacking, but not like this. This is a cool composite. I think the composition of the women is nicely done. nature, women, natural light that looks normal, just like you would see it if you were walking thru the woods int he middle of the day.
Jul 11, 2016 14:01:47 #
chazz4623
Loc: Prairieville, La
Are there still naked people in the woods. Sounds like a great photo op. lol Good to part company with someone with issues like that .
buckwheat wrote:
Funny you mention Colorado. I was born in Boulder (a long time ago)and my the time I got back from the Air Force one got used to seeing naked people in the woods. I was married at the time to a very jealous woman, who quit going on hikes with me because of that. Fortunately we parted company.
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Jul 11, 2016 15:58:32 #
A I understand there are. I haven't been back there since 1985, as all my friends or family have either moved or died. But I hear that Boulder has actually become more liberal than Berkley
chazz4623 wrote:
Are there still naked people in the woods. Sounds like a great photo op. lol Good to part company with someone with issues like that .
Jul 11, 2016 17:48:59 #
Jul 14, 2016 06:10:11 #
The distance between poses is part of the problem in emphasis being drawn away from the model. Also the busy scene behind her is another distraction. If you could tighten up the distances, lower the exposure to background Boken would help....it might look good.
Jan 19, 2018 08:25:55 #
buckwheat wrote:
Thanks for the comments and constructive criticism. I made this composite a couple of years ago but always wondered if I missed the mark. But I'm still learning.
I suggest a different color for the skirt bands, perhaps in the red group. Pose them to create a circular pattern with the trees being the apex.
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