A thought in layers
Apr 22, 2016 17:34:14 #
rborud
Loc: Minnesota
Hi folks
This is a little peice I sent with a pic of the week I send out as you can imagine weekly. The image was done in layers and alot of hand work. I do this each week, but I was interested in the thoughts of fellow hoggers. The doggerel is mia coulpa.
A country road, in the early bleakness of spring. A ride, a word, a thought so fine. To find I think it was not truly mine. I wondered, as we moved, could this be quick, or all in me. The miasma feeling, and bits of fear, did indeed tease the emotion along my edges. The end of this strange yet beauty of a road did come. Real, or not my question is, I saw or not this short and wondrous passage such. When real was assured, restored and felt. I cleared, I said please let it be, if only just some.
This is a little peice I sent with a pic of the week I send out as you can imagine weekly. The image was done in layers and alot of hand work. I do this each week, but I was interested in the thoughts of fellow hoggers. The doggerel is mia coulpa.
A country road, in the early bleakness of spring. A ride, a word, a thought so fine. To find I think it was not truly mine. I wondered, as we moved, could this be quick, or all in me. The miasma feeling, and bits of fear, did indeed tease the emotion along my edges. The end of this strange yet beauty of a road did come. Real, or not my question is, I saw or not this short and wondrous passage such. When real was assured, restored and felt. I cleared, I said please let it be, if only just some.
Apr 22, 2016 19:26:51 #
Very imaginative! Can't say I like the road dead center I'll give you an A+ for originality.
Apr 23, 2016 07:25:39 #
Wonderful effect. I agree that you could have shot a bit more to you right, but maybe not.
Apr 23, 2016 09:37:38 #
This version sure sets a mood. Did you throw in a little Smart Editor? They do something very similar with the sky.
Apr 23, 2016 10:06:52 #
Breaking the rules can be very effective, and you've done it extremely well here, in my opinion. This is creative and not the same old same old.
We need more of this.
Well done.
Pierre
We need more of this.
Well done.
Pierre
Apr 24, 2016 17:05:45 #
Apr 25, 2016 11:32:05 #
Dream-like and very original. My suggestion would be to ease off the vignette along the bottom, leaving more of an arch rather than the complete ellipse.
Apr 25, 2016 13:13:13 #
rborud
Loc: Minnesota
R.G. wrote:
Dream-like and very original. My suggestion would be to ease off the vignette along the bottom, leaving more of an arch rather than the complete ellipse.
R.G.
You are brilliant! I did not think of it. I will make alterations before I send it out to my pic of the week.
RBorud
May 1, 2016 10:21:59 #
May 13, 2016 21:06:55 #
rborud wrote:
Hi folks br This is a little peice I sent with a p... (show quote)
I would have framed it with the road at diagonal but interesting. As to the words. I get spells like that. I have dipped into poetry in the past.
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