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Mar 23, 2016 00:03:42   #
Darkroom317 Loc: Mishawaka, IN
 
A couple of photos of the Grand Canyon from a recent trip out west

Comment and critique appreciated





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Mar 23, 2016 02:37:44   #
Steve_m Loc: Southern California
 
Darkroom317 wrote:
A couple of photos of the Grand Canyon from a recent trip out west

Comment and critique appreciated


I am missing colors.

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Mar 23, 2016 04:21:21   #
creativ simon Loc: Coulsdon, South London
 
Darkroom317 wrote:
A couple of photos of the Grand Canyon from a recent trip out west

Comment and critique appreciated


Really needs the color

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Mar 23, 2016 04:59:24   #
Leicaflex Loc: Cymru
 
Excellent compositions and would work slightly better with a boost in the contrast.
Well taken though.

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Mar 23, 2016 08:00:09   #
Doddy Loc: Barnard Castle-England
 
Great Vista darkroom..but B&W doesn't do them justice.

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Mar 23, 2016 09:01:12   #
Bob Yankle Loc: Burlington, NC
 
Unlike most of the others, I like this study of the strata in monochrome. There is much there to be liked.

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Mar 23, 2016 10:24:56   #
Darkroom317 Loc: Mishawaka, IN
 
Thanks for the replies. I don't usually work in color unless color is subject. That was not the subject for me here. The light, its variations and shadows were the subject for me. Color in this case would have been verbose. Therefore I didn't shoot any color.

I agree with a slight boost in contrast. I already changed the contrast when I took these by using a deep red filter. There wasn't much contrast in the canyon at the time.

When I actually go to print these I will see what I can actually do with that. These at the moment are rough edits that I liked well enough to share..

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Mar 23, 2016 10:25:09   #
Darkroom317 Loc: Mishawaka, IN
 
Bob Yankle wrote:
Unlike most of the others, I like this study of the strata in monochrome. There is much there to be liked.


Thanks

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Mar 23, 2016 10:28:46   #
Darkroom317 Loc: Mishawaka, IN
 
Leicaflex wrote:
Excellent compositions and would work slightly better with a boost in the contrast.
Well taken though.


Thanks. I agree with you on contrast. My concern is that they will become too gritty if I go too far.

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Mar 23, 2016 12:22:31   #
davefales Loc: Virginia
 
I do not think the strata are apparent.

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Mar 24, 2016 06:06:37   #
John N Loc: HP14 3QF Stokenchurch, UK
 
Somethings are best left in colour. Needs a genius to do this justice in black and white. Where's Ansel when you need him?

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Mar 24, 2016 07:11:57   #
chazz4623 Loc: Prairieville, La
 
Nice composition DR, download would have been much better. I cant feel the draw of these, definitely needs more contrast. After the thousands upon thousands of shots available of these views, its tough to get something that stands out. Good effort. Try to provide download if you would on future postings. Thanks C

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Mar 24, 2016 11:35:59   #
Mark7829 Loc: Calfornia
 
Darkroom317 wrote:
A couple of photos of the Grand Canyon from a recent trip out west

Comment and critique appreciated


First one, not so much. The second, nicely done. Check your levels so that your blacks and whites are at optimum.

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Mar 24, 2016 12:15:57   #
LennyP4868 Loc: NJ
 
the beauty of the Grand canyon are the colors in the layers of crust. B&W does not do it any justice Color

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Mar 24, 2016 12:28:40   #
Darkroom317 Loc: Mishawaka, IN
 
For those wanting color. There is no color version.

For those saying more contrast, please be specific. More contrast in too generic of a term, that offers very little

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