the Dungeon redone
Feb 23, 2016 20:09:01 #
Taking your suggestions and a redone version.
Feb 23, 2016 22:09:06 #
It seems overall too dark. I love the picture, but it doesn't really grab my attention. I like the balance between the ground and the sky.
Feb 24, 2016 07:11:02 #
Feb 24, 2016 08:00:43 #
I like this version better. More pleasing to the eye and I am feeling I don't have to squint when I look at it.
Feb 24, 2016 08:08:10 #
This will probably cause you to pull your hair out, but I liked it better uncropped. Now you have a dark blob in the upper left corner. I would rather see the whole cloud though I wish the dark cloud arching over the top wasn't there at all, but when you crop it out you end up with the blob. Have you tried to process the sky separately?
Feb 24, 2016 10:23:18 #
MTG44 wrote:
I like this version better. More pleasing to the eye and I am feeling I don't have to squint when I look at it.
thank you for the critique , I kind of like it better myself. Just have to change my mind on the final image size, and a few minor tweeks.
Feb 24, 2016 10:27:06 #
Country's Mama wrote:
This will probably cause you to pull your hair out, but I liked it better uncropped. Now you have a dark blob in the upper left corner. I would rather see the whole cloud though I wish the dark cloud arching over the top wasn't there at all, but when you crop it out you end up with the blob. Have you tried to process the sky separately?
Thank you for pointing that out. The dark cloud is very easy to eliminate and like you I think it would help the image as it does pull your eyes,the same happened with the white cloud that was present in the first post.
Feb 24, 2016 12:32:09 #
It really doesn't do anything for me. I do like the location however and if you have any in color and from different perspectives I would love to see them.
Feb 24, 2016 15:59:09 #
Feb 24, 2016 16:50:24 #
To me the grass blends into the rock which blends into the water. The sky,of course is easily separated but the rest appears muddled. This is a definite improvement over the original. I studied that one quite a while before I figured what the features were but that's probably on me. I think color would help.
Feb 24, 2016 18:01:27 #
Feb 24, 2016 18:03:09 #
iDoc wrote:
To me the grass blends into the rock which blends into the water. The sky,of course is easily separated but the rest appears muddled. This is a definite improvement over the original. I studied that one quite a while before I figured what the features were but that's probably on me. I think color would help.
thanks for the comment, I'll look if I still have a color one and post .
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