There is something here that has called my attention. You have a great histogram of this shot that does not show clipping of the highlights and still I do not see enough details in the bright areas like it should be.
If you have an explanation for it I would certainly would like to know about it.
I think the focus is a bit soft and that's why the details aren't crisp.
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