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Feb 18, 2016 00:13:19   #
Pilot 6 Loc: Eugene, OR
 
As does music, this speaks for it's self---or doesn't.

Nikon P610 at about 14mm
Nikon P610 at about 14mm...
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Feb 18, 2016 14:07:23   #
Nightski
 
I looked at this .. there was something i liked .. but something that seemed over the top. At first I thought you had over done the post work on the colour. Then I did the download and changed my mind. No . this is a couple of electric boxes on a wall that's been painted grafitti style. I like that .. then I covered the windows with an envelope .. that was it! I would lose the windows. Crop right at the edge to keep as much stone wall as possible, but I think you will see a much stronger image if you do that.

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Feb 18, 2016 16:13:54   #
Pilot 6 Loc: Eugene, OR
 
Nightski wrote:
I looked at this .. there was something i liked .. but something that seemed over the top. At first I thought you had over done the post work on the colour. Then I did the download and changed my mind. No . this is a couple of electric boxes on a wall that's been painted grafitti style. I like that .. then I covered the windows with an envelope .. that was it! I would lose the windows. Crop right at the edge to keep as much stone wall as possible, but I think you will see a much stronger image if you do that.
I looked at this .. there was something i liked ..... (show quote)

Thanks Sandra. Good suggestions---but I'm troubled with having the one meter almost smack-dab in the middle of an almost square format---and that one vertical line ?? How about splitting the difference and taking out the window on the right----? I'll give it a try. Stay tuned. Bob

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Feb 18, 2016 16:30:39   #
Pilot 6 Loc: Eugene, OR
 
I'll keep this one. CropBop!

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Feb 19, 2016 04:19:42   #
Uuglypher Loc: South Dakota (East River)
 
Pilot 6 wrote:
As does music, this speaks for it's self---or doesn't.


Although I agree with Sandra's suggested crop, your less severe crop is a bit of an improvement.

Dave

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