Thank you fuminous, that's a thorough, fair and helpful critique - I had spotted that sprig and felt the same as you. I may go back and have another go at the whole thing - remembering which Topaz filters formed the basis of the effect is the difficult part!
fuminous wrote:
I like this a lot- very theatrical feel to it with tones of apprehension- bolstered by your monolog. Yes, knocking down exposure on the left would discourage my eye from wandering too long there. Also, that little sprig on the lances/poles draws unneeded attention- it just seems too happy for this image- too Gumby-ish" while some of the brightest parts of the entire work are right at the upper edge; those could be toned down, too. Given youve added voice to the image, Ill presume the warrior is the main subject but the top of the lances/poles is what I see most- much texture and detail in the rope and finials- which I like, but competes, with the character. Again, referencing your monolog, I like the facial tone and feel its just right. If the tonal value of the helmet- the horizontal piece across the eyes- could be brought up a tad and the rope/polls/lances/finials down, itd fit MY interpretation of the image. But
heck, its your image and really good.
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