Daddy's Princess
Dec 8, 2015 12:10:03 #
Dec 8, 2015 12:38:53 #
All in all a nice cute image. Nice perspective gained by shooting slightly upwards. The hands not quite touching but looking as if they want to is real sweet. The whole idea of dad reaching in to his daughter is very good
How much further you go with it is down to patience and how adept you are at PP.
To perfect it the cars in the background needs cloning out as does the car interior light and you have artifacts on the car window under dads mouth. Could have occurred when converting to mono.
Easily fixed in PP. Do those few steps and its worthy of a frame
It helps if you click on Save Original so your work can be downloaded
How much further you go with it is down to patience and how adept you are at PP.
To perfect it the cars in the background needs cloning out as does the car interior light and you have artifacts on the car window under dads mouth. Could have occurred when converting to mono.
Easily fixed in PP. Do those few steps and its worthy of a frame
It helps if you click on Save Original so your work can be downloaded
Dec 8, 2015 15:09:59 #
transcriber wrote:
Any and all critiques welcome and thank you!
You have a keeper here, with great spontaneous expressions on both parties. Usually I don't like cut off pieces of faces but I think it works here because it lets the girl remain the subject and the dad play his supporting role.
I agree with Billy that eliminating the cars' reflections would help overall. I am wondering why you decided to go with monochrome on this one?
Dec 8, 2015 17:50:22 #
Thank you so much! Truly appreciate all your help!
Billyspad wrote:
All in all a nice cute image. Nice perspective gai... (show quote)
Dec 8, 2015 17:51:00 #
Thank you so much! Appreciate your opinion, I just tend to favor black and white!
minniev wrote:
You have a keeper here, with great spontaneous expressions on both parties. Usually I don't like cut off pieces of faces but I think it works here because it lets the girl remain the subject and the dad play his supporting role.
I agree with Billy that eliminating the cars' reflections would help overall. I am wondering why you decided to go with monochrome on this one?
I agree with Billy that eliminating the cars' reflections would help overall. I am wondering why you decided to go with monochrome on this one?
Dec 8, 2015 18:58:31 #
Frank2013
Loc: San Antonio, TX. & Milwaukee, WI.
I concur with the previous posters but in addition feel the dad's face has motion blur......hard to tell without download checked. Good attempt transcriber.
Dec 8, 2015 19:49:20 #
Thank you!
Frank2013 wrote:
I concur with the previous posters but in addition feel the dad's face has motion blur......hard to tell without download checked. Good attempt transcriber.
Dec 9, 2015 02:25:43 #
Joanna27
Loc: Lakewood Ca
Billyspad wrote:
All in all a nice cute image. Nice perspective gai... (show quote)
I agree with Billy, the white car is a big distraction for me. Don't know why but I keep looking pass her face to look at the car. I'm not a car person so I don't why I'm interested in the car.
Dec 9, 2015 04:50:01 #
[Thank you!
Quote=Joanna27]I agree with Billy, the white car is a big distraction for me. Don't know why but I keep looking pass her face to look at the car. I'm not a car person so I don't why I'm interested in the car.[/quote]
Quote=Joanna27]I agree with Billy, the white car is a big distraction for me. Don't know why but I keep looking pass her face to look at the car. I'm not a car person so I don't why I'm interested in the car.[/quote]
Dec 9, 2015 05:32:50 #
Joanna27 wrote:
I agree with Billy, the white car is a big distraction for me. Don't know why but I keep looking pass her face to look at the car. I'm not a car person so I don't why I'm interested in the car.
Its not lack of or indeed interest in cars Joanna its the distraction of having a light object there. A road sign would have the same effect.
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