Shoes
Dec 7, 2015 13:49:21 #
Frank2013
Loc: San Antonio, TX. & Milwaukee, WI.
Linda From Maine wrote:
The straights lines of the beams and the angled lines of the metal poles - I think they directed my eye around the frame and it felt comfortable to follow those lines to discover the details. And then the "whole" seemed balanced insofar as I didn't want to flip it :) or crop, or see more that might have been cut off.
Thank you Linda....your explanation of balance gives me thought for improving future composition.
Dec 7, 2015 15:08:01 #
There's a load more detail in those thar timbers that needs dragging out. St3v3 has got the detail going right but the sepia seriously sucks. So get that in BW.
Great subject not keen on the vegetation in the background might try a very gentle vignette to keep the eyes in the center.
Great subject not keen on the vegetation in the background might try a very gentle vignette to keep the eyes in the center.
Dec 7, 2015 18:05:27 #
Frank2013
Loc: San Antonio, TX. & Milwaukee, WI.
Billyspad wrote:
There's a load more detail in those thar timbers that needs dragging out. St3v3 has got the detail going right but the sepia seriously sucks. So get that in BW.
Great subject not keen on the vegetation in the background might try a very gentle vignette to keep the eyes in the center.
Great subject not keen on the vegetation in the background might try a very gentle vignette to keep the eyes in the center.
I got lazy about the background but did not want to take away from the shoes with that beautiful timer.
Dec 8, 2015 09:43:47 #
I like your idea a lot--but I think it needs toned down some; it seems a little too bright for me.
Dec 8, 2015 10:03:55 #
Frank2013
Loc: San Antonio, TX. & Milwaukee, WI.
jaymatt wrote:
I like your idea a lot--but I think it needs toned down some; it seems a little too bright for me.
Thank for your input jaymatt, I will keep that in mind.
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