My first Haiku
Nov 14, 2015 19:44:13 #
Nov 14, 2015 20:20:24 #
Nov 14, 2015 21:19:02 #
Frank2013
Loc: San Antonio, TX. & Milwaukee, WI.
mcveed wrote:
and maybe my last
Maybe spoken a bit more gently.lol
Nov 15, 2015 00:16:04 #
St3v3M wrote:
Dark water,
Gentle breeze,
Eternal sleep
Gentle breeze,
Eternal sleep
Sorry, Steve. I'm not ready for the eternal sleep yet.
Nov 15, 2015 00:21:02 #
mcveed wrote:
and maybe my last
Nicely done, Don; image and haiku indeed complementary.
I do hope this will not be your last!
Dave
Nov 15, 2015 00:26:03 #
Uuglypher wrote:
Nicely done, Don; image and haiku indeed complementary.
I do hope this will not be your last!
Dave
I do hope this will not be your last!
Dave
Dave, it won't be, as long as I can avoid that eternal sleep!
Nov 15, 2015 11:05:17 #
mcveed wrote:
and maybe my last
Photo seems a bit dark; but then, the poem suggests that it is the end of the day, so it would be appropriate that the photo is dark. I like it.
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