ebrunner wrote:
I think that is a great portrait. It has a wonderful feel to it. I would suggest that the background needs to be less obtrusive and there is a round something that seems to be growing out of his helmet. If you could make those items less obvious, this would really pop. I think I would also crop out the shoulder of the guy he's looking at. It is obvious that he is interacting with someone; but the shoulder is not necessary to convey that message. Nice work.
Thanks for your suggestions. I could remove them all but decided to leave it as the camera saw it. I might still make some of you ideas happen but I will ask the fellow whose photograph this is before making any decision to do that. After all, this is his favorite environment and he may want that stuff left in. His choice.
Thanks for the compliment - much appreciated.