Welcome to the Astrophotography section!
Great Start, Richard.
I figure I'm new at this too.
I've only gotten really serious since last April or so when I jumped with abandon and ordered my wish list.
In August, I discovered time-lapse of the skies. Now I go and set my camera and tripod and let the Intervalometer march the camera along.
This morning I gathered up my treasure and found close to 3000 exposures to play with. :shock: (OK, 2,777, but who's counting... ;) )
Enough about that. :roll:
You done good to title in your settings and lenses. Next time, Please check the little box to the right that sez store original.
That way we can download and examine your photo for you much better, including checking the EXIF data of the frame.
Off hand, I would suggest more sky, less Terra Firma.
They call it The Rule of Thirds. Roughly, 1/3 of something (ground), and 2/3rds of your other composition (stars).
Another way to compose is just enough Terra to show reference, and the rest sky.
1/2-1/2 is fine, but it can leave the eye, or my cocked eye anyway, wondering if the rocks were the subject, or the stars.
So I'm suggesting more stars, if stars are your aim.
I would like to offer a single random sample, (From my phone camera) the sky was my aim to capture the sunrise. Centered bottom is my "real" camera on my tripod capturing time-lapsed shots.
http://www.dropbox.com/sc/iatxjne1e4iqflv/AAAjvPlT6cg2AvCiB-u3rVJZa (Sometimes this link is slow for me. ???)
See how the subject, the sky, is the most predominant thing before the viewers eye. ;)
So caution, you are standing on the edge of a very slippery slope.
You can slide right into Astrophotography from here. My demise began when I laid in a lawn chair, in insulated Carrhart coveralls, tripping my cameras shutter with a hand held release on a cold California evening.
And I succumbed to the wonders of the Universe.
As it has been said, it is the most rewarding, yet frustrating type of photography you can undertake.
The "guy" that dragged me into this has returned. My favorite constellation Orion the Hunter.
And why I had my camera shooting 4 frames a minute, for nearly 12 hours overnight. To gather the 2,600-ish frames for todays gleefilled project. (And changing camera batteries @ 2 AM.)
Orion was quickly slipping South in the early spring when I spotted the Nebula through a 60X spotting scope.
This cycle, I'm armed to the teeth and been practicing.
You, and Cathy too, have come to a really great place to begin Astrophotography. There are many die hard Astronomers here who pursue the same thing. And they are incredibly friendly and immensely helpful.
Please shoot and post away. Be patient while the Big Guns find and comment to help you along.
Lastly, I find the delete key, and Format in my camera, forgives all sins.
If, perchance, you are interested, I would share where I am depositing my feeble attempts at time lapsed Astrophotography.
Sonny Edmonds on YouTube. (I suggest any choice be viewed full screen and speakers on.)