Charleston SC. @ the Battery
Just looking for feedback...
I'd rather not...........
You can and will do better.
I think I posted the wrong one..... but you really didn't have to say tha.
quote=donrent]I'd rather not...........[/quote]
I like the colors and the composition. It suggests the beach and the wildflowers growing along the shore without beating you over the head with it.
Like the use of symbolism in writing, you hint of a bigger idea by revealing it in small glimpses. It's a valid approach.
I don't why the other posted felt the need to say he'd rather not. If you'd rather not then just don't. Why be mean.
And to the one who says you'll do better, why not drop a hint of what you think could be better?
When the focal point is hidden, your eye does not know where to go. I would recommend the focal point be in front of the out of focus image. Usually, art leads the eye into the image.
I like this. Please post the one you intended.
IMHO there needs to be more in focus. The combination of in and out is OK, but the percentage of in needs to be higher. I ask the question: Are we looking at a sailboat through some weeds? Or are we looking at weeds and there happens to be a sailboat going by?
Sbrown2813 wrote:
Just looking for feedback...
Your title doesn't really relate to the image. Good Battery images are all around you. Show some of those.
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