gym
Loc: Athens, Georgia
I had the opportunity (whether it's positive or negative remains to be seen) to be the primary photographer at a beach wedding this past October. I've never done a wedding before, and was never really comfortable being the one they were counting on for their memories. There are no traditional, preplanned poses. Everything was done 'on the fly' and to compound things, it was a VERY overcast day. But the bride liked the results, so I guess that's all that counts. I've done some small touch-ups on some with Photoshop Elements, but would like some criticism on how some of these shots could be improved - either through more editing, or through cropping.
Thanks for any advice you can provide.
Bmac
Loc: Long Island, NY
gym wrote:
....But the bride liked the results, so I guess that's all that counts. I've done some small touch-ups on some with Photoshop Elements, but would like some criticism on how some of these shots could be improved - either through more editing, or through cropping. Thanks for any advice you can provide.
You are correct, the bride liking the results is all that counts. I like them also, they seem spontaneous and filled with energy, as do the bride and groom. What strikes me is that the photos convey the feeling that they are truly in love. I think you did a very nice job. :)
Very good shooting. Pictures would work for most people. :thumbup: :thumbup: :thumbup:
gym wrote:
I had the opportunity (whether it's positive or negative remains to be seen) to be the primary photographer at a beach wedding this past October. I've never done a wedding before, and was never really comfortable being the one they were counting on for their memories. There are no traditional, preplanned poses. Everything was done 'on the fly' and to compound things, it was a VERY overcast day. But the bride liked the results, so I guess that's all that counts. I've done some small touch-ups on some with Photoshop Elements, but would like some criticism on how some of these shots could be improved - either through more editing, or through cropping.
Thanks for any advice you can provide.
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Just want to say: # 5 is my favorite. Bride reflecting on her day after all of the guest have gone. There is something beautiful about that splash of orange in the bouquet against the back drop of the ocean. It provides an interesting composition in my eyes. Keep shooting! Keep improving! :D
I also like them. Very nice.
i've shot several beach weddings my friend,and your work is awsome...very good shots,very good work.
-jim1945-
I agree with the criticism given already however, good job generally in such a situation...I'd be petrified.
i look at these photos and look again. i say this when i really like what i see. the shots satisfy me. they please my vision. thank you.
The last one is my favorite. A bride alone with her thoughts. You can see the love she has for her new husband all over her face. You really captured the moment there.
The picture with the bride, groom and minister.. next time, try standing on the other side... with the minister. That way you capture just the bride and groom.
Overall, great pictures!
I just looked at these again and the only additional comment I have is a suggestion to SLIGHTLY smooth her skin in the first shot.
The lighting seems to be accentuating every imperfection, which is generally not good except for a character shot of a craggy man face.
gym wrote:
I had the opportunity (whether it's positive or negative remains to be seen) to be the primary photographer at a beach wedding this past October. I've never done a wedding before, and was never really comfortable being the one they were counting on for their memories. There are no traditional, preplanned poses. Everything was done 'on the fly' and to compound things, it was a VERY overcast day. But the bride liked the results, so I guess that's all that counts. I've done some small touch-ups on some with Photoshop Elements, but would like some criticism on how some of these shots could be improved - either through more editing, or through cropping.
Thanks for any advice you can provide.
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I think they are beautiful photos, but might be even nicer if the skin tones were a little lighter
gym wrote:
I had the opportunity (whether it's positive or negative remains to be seen) to be the primary photographer at a beach wedding this past October. I've never done a wedding before, and was never really comfortable being the one they were counting on for their memories. There are no traditional, preplanned poses. Everything was done 'on the fly' and to compound things, it was a VERY overcast day. But the bride liked the results, so I guess that's all that counts. I've done some small touch-ups on some with Photoshop Elements, but would like some criticism on how some of these shots could be improved - either through more editing, or through cropping.
Thanks for any advice you can provide.
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:P 1st time great job.
Now you can understand wedding problems, each is different and a task. You reached your goal bride results. Now study for next op.
gym
Loc: Athens, Georgia
Thank you all for your comments and suggestions. As you can imagine, I took TONS of photos and posted only a few. Modifying and editing in Photoshop Elements is yet another adventure that I'm moving into with both anticipation and trepidation. :)
I tried some things that seemed to work, and others that either didn't work or have gotten mixed reviews. One photo that seems to generate polarizing views is photo number two. I wanted to create a scene where, by shooting through the grass, I could suggest a more intimate moment. Because the wedding was very small and private, I felt it was almost as if the photographer was spying on the event. But it seems either one likes it or dislikes it, with not many in the middle.
One thing that's really come to the fore for me is 'light'. It's like emphasizing the obvious, but I think a lot of people who are just 'beginning', don't realize just how important a little light here and there can be. Tiny amounts, when directed properly, have tremendous affects on the outcome.
I"ll keep clicking and occasionally posting here to get more of your insights.
Thanks again
Jim
gym wrote:
One thing that's really come to the fore for me is 'light'. It's like emphasizing the obvious, but I think a lot of people who are just 'beginning', don't realize just how important a little light here and there can be. Tiny amounts, when directed properly, have tremendous affects on the outcome.
Exactly...right on the money.
I know that that was a revelation for me also....
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