Here is a black and white of some balls.....cannon that is!
sinatraman
Loc: Vero Beach Florida, Earth,alpha quaudrant
2 sugestions for improvement. first get rid of that annoying date and time stamp. nothing screams snapshot worse. second when you have a boring background, fill the frame with your subject which is the cannon and cannon balls. all the grass around the cannon is unnecessary info. move closer with your feet then zoom in so that the photo should be about the cannon balls. your compisitionaal idea was correct you just need to get closer. :!:
Thank you sinatraman for your critique, like I told another photographer I have been trying to get rid of the time stamp, but no luck as of yet...Will go back and try to get a better shot!
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