A few from this past weekend. This young lady has potential...but needs to quit talking and more eye contact.
. . . and probably not her last!
Nice shooting, Bret, particularly the last shot -- erotic and sensual. On the first one, however, the focus might have better served on her eyes. :-) And beautiful light on the second, along with a great setting and location.
I think they turned out o.k..
I think #1 is very good. It shows a sensuality by the way she is posing.
#2 I think would have been much better had you shot from the side of the bed instead of at the base where it shows the bed frame. The frame is competing with the model for prominence.
#3 is very sensual
I tell clients/models to talk with their expressions. moving mouths make funny shapes...
First has great potential, as you say if she had made eye contact with the camera and had a highlight in the eyes. That brown knot on the treated post distracts me. Second really like other than too much background, not enough of her. Maybe try a crop just at top of bedspread for all white background contrasting with her? Third very nice - would have liked the legs a little brighter without blowing out her stomach.