critique please
Mar 20, 2012 15:30:49 #
Mar 20, 2012 16:37:32 #
I'd say too much of the trees and not enough of the headstone. The trees are not the subject here. I would have also used a different angle to elimate the sign or what ever is behind the first tombstone. Being closer, to actually be able to read some of the stone is another approach. The top of the stone in the botton of the pic is distracting too. I'd have made sure it was not in the picture when I took it, can't be cropped out either in this shot. To me there really is no focal point in the picture. Just some suggestions.
Mike
Mike
Mar 20, 2012 16:46:18 #
Have to agree with renomike...looks like a snopshot. No real composition. There look to be several interesting things to photograph here, but tighter shots with more emphasis on individual elements would work better.
Mar 20, 2012 17:44:57 #
Really not a place I want to be any time soon. As for the photo, not much to hold one's interest though many things in view that could be if singled out. Composition not really the best with this one. Sorry but that's the way I see it.
Mar 20, 2012 18:21:02 #
I am inclined to agree with the others here. The way the tree is shaped and the placement of the headstones my eye is actually drawn toward the back of the picture past the cemetary to what looks like an empty field behind it. A different angle would certainly be something to consider.
Mar 21, 2012 19:02:31 #
Mar 21, 2012 19:34:35 #
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