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Apr 30, 2015 19:28:10   #
dansmith Loc: Southwest Alberta Canada
 
...Crop as suggested by jim hill. Thoughts?

Off to Camera Club tonight. See you folks later.



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Apr 30, 2015 23:34:18   #
Uuglypher Loc: South Dakota (East River)
 
dansmith wrote:
...Crop as suggested by jim hill. Thoughts?

Off to Camera Club tonight. See you folks later.


Hi, Dan,
I like this better too!
Especially because it moves the receding row of bright arches projected on the floor more toward the central vertical axis of the image. Once I saw that, the original one fell to a distant second!
A really good imaged really improved!
There's another one I learned a good lesson from!

Good eye, Jim.

Dave

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May 1, 2015 14:56:35   #
dansmith Loc: Southwest Alberta Canada
 
Uuglypher wrote:
Hi, Dan,
I like this better too!
Especially because it moves the receding row of bright arches projected on the floor more toward the central vertical axis of the image. Once I saw that, the original one fell to a distant second!
A really good imaged really improved!
There's another one I learned a good lesson from!

Good eye, Jim.

Dave


Looking again this am, yes, this is the crop.

Big thanks to Jim.

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May 1, 2015 15:54:56   #
Nightski
 
A link to the first post of this image.
http://www.uglyhedgehog.com/t-303992-2.html#5126082

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May 1, 2015 16:45:08   #
Nightski
 
I think this one draws the viewer into the image more, but i am mourning the loss of that awesome little window. :-(

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May 1, 2015 18:07:17   #
jim hill Loc: Springfield, IL
 
dansmith wrote:
...Crop as suggested by jim hill. Thoughts?

Off to Camera Club tonight. See you folks later.


Nicely done. Love the image. It smacks of things long past and the wait for things to come. Strange, huh?

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May 1, 2015 18:08:47   #
jim hill Loc: Springfield, IL
 
Nightski wrote:
I think this one draws the viewer into the image more, but i am mourning the loss of that awesome little window. :-(


In a way, so am I. Whatever presence is behind the wall has no way of looking out now.

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