Night shot composite
Apr 26, 2015 17:22:27 #
greg vescuso
Loc: Ozark,Mo.
I took this shot in a alley in Joplin Mo last night. This shot is a 15 second exposure with a flash in each side of the window, 1 stop cto gels on them. The model is from a two light set up on a grey background . Thanks for looking and C & C is always welcome.
Apr 27, 2015 06:42:18 #
greg vescuso wrote:
I took this shot in a alley in Joplin Mo last night. This shot is a 15 second exposure with a flash in each side of the window, 1 stop cto gels on them. The model is from a two light set up on a grey background . Thanks for looking and C & C is always welcome.
Nice shot and work Greg. Still not sure how you did this but I like it.
Apr 27, 2015 08:02:43 #
First of all, I love the mood of the image!
As far as the girl, it doesn't work for me. With the angle of the light on the girl there should be a shadow somewhere on the wall behind her. Also, her feet are not anchored to the ground, it's as if she is floating. If that's the look you were going for then great but if not, there probably needs to have a slight drop shadow around her feet.
Just my two cents worth.
As far as the girl, it doesn't work for me. With the angle of the light on the girl there should be a shadow somewhere on the wall behind her. Also, her feet are not anchored to the ground, it's as if she is floating. If that's the look you were going for then great but if not, there probably needs to have a slight drop shadow around her feet.
Just my two cents worth.
Apr 27, 2015 10:13:58 #
greg vescuso
Loc: Ozark,Mo.
Fstop12 wrote:
First of all, I love the mood of the image!
As far as the girl, it doesn't work for me. With the angle of the light on the girl there should be a shadow somewhere on the wall behind her. Also, her feet are not anchored to the ground, it's as if she is floating. If that's the look you were going for then great but if not, there probably needs to have a slight drop shadow around her feet.
Just my two cents worth.
As far as the girl, it doesn't work for me. With the angle of the light on the girl there should be a shadow somewhere on the wall behind her. Also, her feet are not anchored to the ground, it's as if she is floating. If that's the look you were going for then great but if not, there probably needs to have a slight drop shadow around her feet.
Just my two cents worth.
Thanks for looking, and your right, I just had this shot of the girl and wanted to give something more to this long exposure of this alley. I think I might add a shadow but I really needed to take the shot of the girl knowing this is the scene I would be putting it into or at least matched the direction of the lighting.
Apr 27, 2015 19:10:28 #
greg vescuso wrote:
I took this shot in a alley in Joplin Mo last night. This shot is a 15 second exposure with a flash in each side of the window, 1 stop cto gels on them. The model is from a two light set up on a grey background . Thanks for looking and C & C is always welcome.
nice photo, just needs alttle more lite, my opinion only
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