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Sep 24, 2011 19:37:26   #
mahma Loc: Lower Alabama
 
These were taken last year with a new Cannon camera.

Red Cactus
Red Cactus...

Fanfare
Fanfare...

From the train
From the train...

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Sep 24, 2011 20:36:50   #
PHOTONUT Loc: western va.
 
I think most every one will tell you to get rid of the date and
time on your photo it compleatly kill's your photograph.The
first thing you see is that yellow date and time sticking out
like a pair of white shoes with a tuxedo,It dont go together.
photonut

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Sep 24, 2011 20:58:11   #
mahma Loc: Lower Alabama
 
I have since removed the time and date stamps from my photos, but what about the pictures themselves? Any comments on them?

cropped the red cactus
cropped the red cactus...

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Sep 24, 2011 21:03:50   #
bobmielke Loc: Portland, OR
 
mahma wrote:
These were taken last year with a new Cannon camera.


The first & third photos have issues with tonal values, meaning there's little contrast difference anywhere in the photo.

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Sep 24, 2011 21:06:08   #
PHOTONUT Loc: western va.
 
I think the photos are very good, the 3nd one has the
post out of focus but you can get rid of that, think you did
a good job.Did not mean to be rude but that date and time
drives me crazy, so many great photos are wasted because
of that. you did good .photonut

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Sep 24, 2011 21:06:11   #
mahma Loc: Lower Alabama
 
bobmielke wrote:
mahma wrote:
These were taken last year with a new Cannon camera.


The first & third photos have issues with tonal values, meaning there's little contrast difference anywhere in the photo.


Thank you for your input.

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Sep 24, 2011 21:07:53   #
mahma Loc: Lower Alabama
 
The third photo was literally taken on a train out of El Paso to LA. And as a side note - I'd only had the camera about 2 days when we left.

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Sep 24, 2011 21:19:17   #
PHOTONUT Loc: western va.
 
I know how that is,I got a new one about a year ago and
if I got one good one out of twenty I thought I was doing
good .Im sure you have got the hang of the new camera
now, just so much to learn.photonut

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Sep 24, 2011 21:24:16   #
photophly Loc: Old Bridge NJ
 
For me these pictures are just snap shots.they really have no interesting ssubject matter.The mountain shot can probably be saved with some cropplng

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Sep 24, 2011 21:25:23   #
bobmielke Loc: Portland, OR
 
mahma wrote:
The third photo was literally taken on a train out of El Paso to LA. And as a side note - I'd only had the camera about 2 days when we left.


You don't need to excuse your photos. That's the greatest thing about this new forum, everybody's here to genuinely lear & get better. Keep shooting. :)

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Sep 24, 2011 21:28:30   #
EricLPT Loc: Jonesborough TN
 
Mahma,

Look at photos that you see that you do like and try to figure out what you like about them, composition, exposure, subject matter, etc.

I agree that these are just snapshots.

Research the three above topics and post some more photos soon, that is how we all improve.

Eric

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Sep 24, 2011 21:28:45   #
bobmielke Loc: Portland, OR
 
I ask the open question, What's wrong with snapshots"? IMHO Nothing!

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Sep 24, 2011 21:32:19   #
PHOTONUT Loc: western va.
 
Bob you took the words right out of my mouth.photonut

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Sep 25, 2011 10:26:53   #
William Loc: Mississippi
 
First tings fourst, find a point of view

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Sep 25, 2011 10:34:19   #
bobmielke Loc: Portland, OR
 
When posting my opinions about photographs I try to find something good about them, pay a compliment on that, then move on to suggestions on how to improve, You don't learn a thing from negative, unproductive comments,

"Thumper"
"Thumper"...

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