Snowy Barn
Mar 9, 2012 10:29:33 #
A heavy snowfall last March at a local park with reconstructed old farm buildings. I thought this was a nice shot of a barn with rail fence and some vegetation. Any critique will be appreciated.
Mar 9, 2012 10:51:07 #
Mar 9, 2012 10:54:38 #
I like it. I understand that many factors play into your composition decisions, but I wonder if the composition would be stronger if the subject was less centered.
Mar 9, 2012 10:59:38 #
I like it, did you shoot any other shots. Stepping to the left if possible could show more fence and maybe place the barn and tree more to the right
Zaurak32 wrote:
A heavy snowfall last March at a local park with reconstructed old farm buildings. I thought this was a nice shot of a barn with rail fence and some vegetation. Any critique will be appreciated.
Mar 9, 2012 12:15:28 #
Mar 9, 2012 12:46:34 #
Mar 9, 2012 19:03:22 #
Thanks everybody. I got the shot I wanted, and after all, isn't that the purpose? If I had shot the barn less centered, I would not have gotten either the rail fence or would have gotten other items I didn't want in this shot. Yes I did take other shots and if I can figure how to post them here I will upload them as a series with this picture. I appreciate everyone who has looked and thought to comment.
Mar 9, 2012 19:06:05 #
ebaribeault wrote:
Love this photo the black and white really works well
Well, this is actually a full color shot. If you look close at the barn on the right side, you will see some color. I made a monochrome copy of this and saw very little difference, but like the color a little bit better.
Mar 10, 2012 05:48:36 #
Mar 10, 2012 11:15:48 #
Mar 10, 2012 13:48:21 #
Mar 10, 2012 13:56:12 #
Zaurak32 wrote:
A heavy snowfall last March at a local park with reconstructed old farm buildings. I thought this was a nice shot of a barn with rail fence and some vegetation. Any critique will be appreciated.
I look at that picture a little different than the others. The unique part of the picture to me is the split rail fence. One sees very few of them. The barn is secondary. The fence on the right leads you directly to the barn. If you move left, you will loose that pathway. If I were to move anywhere I would move right and use more of the fence to guide you to the barn, However it is your picture and you are the one who has to be happy with it. No matter which way it is taken it is a nice scene and capture.
Swede
Mar 10, 2012 14:01:10 #
Like your shot alot. I shot this one a couple of weeks ago during an ice storm. It was sleeting and the temp was starting to rise so the ice was falling off the trees. Only half way decent shot I got all day......
Mar 10, 2012 22:13:05 #
Mar 11, 2012 00:14:40 #
My favorite barn without snow. You can see the result of years of "snow load" Within sight of I-15, Lima Montana. (hope it was ok to add this). P&S in the middle of the day.
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