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Mar 9, 2012 11:55:02   #
Starr Loc: St. Louis, MO
 
I'm glad I was down on the ground level. Thanks Sdaupanner.

Sdaupanner wrote:
I would have to ask in the window one where is the girls parents?? Really great picture thou kind of made my toes curl from the height.

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Mar 9, 2012 11:57:37   #
Starr Loc: St. Louis, MO
 
grhound wrote:
All three are good pictures but I think the first two are excellent.


Thank you grhound. We only got one small snow here in St. Louis this year and I am bummed.

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Mar 9, 2012 13:40:50   #
photogrl57 Loc: Tennessee
 
ole sarg wrote:
I know little about macro photography so will not comment.

IMO The third shot is problematic. If you crop you will lose the idea of height of the window in which the girl appears. You get the idea of height from seeing the roof top and the sky and building behind the structure. Also, you would lose the cornice on the white building. Further, if you crop all you have is a girl in a window and she could be at floor level or on the second story.

So if you crop these are the problems you create. I think by simply straightening the buildings (I don't know how to do this kind of thing I have little or no PP skills)and with a good caption you have a pretty good illustration of the loneliness of city life.
I know little about macro photography so will not ... (show quote)


Actually believe it or not the building is straight .. look at the corner to the left of the window where the girl is ... that corner is perfectly vertical .. the rest is an optical illusion

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Mar 9, 2012 13:45:07   #
ole sarg Loc: south florida
 
lover optical illusions. The Japanese characters for optical illusion utilize the character for elephant. Now that is one beast that is an optical illusion if you have never seen one!

Did you find the comments about cropping helpful? Although, I am not too good of a photographer, I spent years as a photo editor but never really had to explain why I cropped or not or the reasons for the actions.



photogrl57 wrote:
ole sarg wrote:
I know little about macro photography so will not comment.

IMO The third shot is problematic. If you crop you will lose the idea of height of the window in which the girl appears. You get the idea of height from seeing the roof top and the sky and building behind the structure. Also, you would lose the cornice on the white building. Further, if you crop all you have is a girl in a window and she could be at floor level or on the second story.

So if you crop these are the problems you create. I think by simply straightening the buildings (I don't know how to do this kind of thing I have little or no PP skills)and with a good caption you have a pretty good illustration of the loneliness of city life.
I know little about macro photography so will not ... (show quote)


Actually believe it or not the building is straight .. look at the corner to the left of the window where the girl is ... that corner is perfectly vertical .. the rest is an optical illusion
quote=ole sarg I know little about macro photogra... (show quote)

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Mar 9, 2012 13:55:37   #
photogrl57 Loc: Tennessee
 
[quote=ole sarg]lover optical illusions. The Japanese characters for optical illusion utilize the character for elephant. Now that is one beast that is an optical illusion if you have never seen one!

Did you find the comments about cropping helpful? Although, I am not too good of a photographer, I spent years as a photo editor but never really had to explain why I cropped or not or the reasons for the actions.



Yes I absolutely agree on the problems that cropping would create .. the photo is fabulous exactly how it was taken :)

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Mar 9, 2012 14:24:53   #
Starr Loc: St. Louis, MO
 
Fabulous? How nice of you to say that! I've been recovering from surgery for the past 6 weeks to I am ready to get back out there and that is exactly what I needed to hear. Thank you!!

[quote=photogrl57]
ole sarg wrote:
lover optical illusions. The Japanese characters for optical illusion utilize the character for elephant. Now that is one beast that is an optical illusion if you have never seen one!

Did you find the comments about cropping helpful? Although, I am not too good of a photographer, I spent years as a photo editor but never really had to explain why I cropped or not or the reasons for the actions.



Yes I absolutely agree on the problems that cropping would create .. the photo is fabulous exactly how it was taken :)
lover optical illusions. The Japanese characters f... (show quote)

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Mar 9, 2012 14:37:52   #
cbdigital Loc: Stony Point, N.Y. 10980
 
More pic's of St. Louis please. My hometown, I live in upstate N.Y. now. The ice pics are cool! For the girl in the window try cropping just two windows from the bld. on the left, her window and the one underneath with the air conditioner in it, and two large windows on the right. You get a cool optical illusion that way. I love to play with my pic's after I take them. Sometimes too much on the sides distracts away from the main subject.

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Mar 9, 2012 15:24:34   #
Starr Loc: St. Louis, MO
 
Hi cbdigital! Thanks for responding to my photos. So you are from St. Louis, eh? Did you work downtown perhaps? I love walking around the city taking pictures and I have ton to share with you. I will be more diligent about posting pictures. I don't know what I was afraid of. Everyone has been so nice!
cbdigital wrote:
More pic's of St. Louis please. My hometown, I live in upstate N.Y. now. The ice pics are cool! For the girl in the window try cropping just two windows from the bld. on the left, her window and the one underneath with the air conditioner in it, and two large windows on the right. You get a cool optical illusion that way. I love to play with my pic's after I take them. Sometimes too much on the sides distracts away from the main subject.

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Sep 20, 2012 14:49:23   #
Wildspirit Loc: Dallas, Texas
 
A bit more contrast would help the first two, I think. I agree that the girl in the window would have been missed if we hadn't been alerted. Nice shots.

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