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WPC 1450 - Public Transportation CRITIQUE
Dec 19, 2014 21:31:00   #
St3v3M Loc: 35,000 feet
 
elmertd's WPC Entry has been selected for the Photo Critique Forum* to find out what could have done to make it better. Be nice, but be honest as this may help everyone with their craft. Thank you everyone!

From WPC 1450 - Public Transportation RESULTS http://www.uglyhedgehog.com/photo_contest_ratings.jsp?pcnum=148

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Riding SEPTA, Philadelphia
Riding SEPTA, Philadelphia...
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Dec 20, 2014 13:50:43   #
Nightski
 
Geez, I love this, elmertd!! You caught a moment? This is a subway train and it's moving on? The only think you could have done better is to have caught it a little more to the left .. you only need the half of that door that shows the billboard and it would be nice to see what is in front of the person .. the person needs to be gazing at something, methinks.

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Dec 20, 2014 20:08:04   #
Country's Mama Loc: Michigan
 
Perfect timing. I agree with Nightski, we need to see more of the lady in the seat to the left. I don't need to see what she is looking at but I think she does need a little room to breath.

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Dec 21, 2014 00:14:43   #
BeaverNewby Loc: Memphis, Tn
 
Hi elmertd
I agree with the reviewers before me the image is technically great(It's sharp, well focused and The PP looks great).
I would have used the comment section in this forum, I see the when and where, but not necessarily the why and how you took the Photo.

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